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Array ( [sid] => 35155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Could [time] => 2004-02-16 00:01:44 [hometext] => This poem is about someone who wishes they could help there child exprees his/or her feelings that were trapped inside of them. [bodytext] => If i could have my wishes i would wish for you to only help you and to comfort you threw,
Threw the pain and sorrow that is trap inside if i could help you right now,
If i could look at your face and see that you are really fine that would satisfyme and bring happiness to the heart of mine,
If I could be there to kiss you goodnight and to hold you so tight my spirit would be so bright to know that i helped you tonight,
If I could just see you tonight I could bring back the peace we have gave away an to help you back in place,
If I could see you right now I would open my eyes so wide and now with happiness we can let things that we cannot hide emotions trapped deep inside,
If I could just hold you, see you, and help you threww terrible times that would be so fine!!
IF I COULD [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => michelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

If I Could

Contributed by michelle on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:01:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

If i could have my wishes i would wish for you to only help you and to comfort you threw,
Threw the pain and sorrow that is trap inside if i could help you right now,
If i could look at your face and see that you are really fine that would satisfyme and bring happiness to the heart of mine,
If I could be there to kiss you goodnight and to hold you so tight my spirit would be so bright to know that i helped you tonight,
If I could just see you tonight I could bring back the peace we have gave away an to help you back in place,
If I could see you right now I would open my eyes so wide and now with happiness we can let things that we cannot hide emotions trapped deep inside,
If I could just hold you, see you, and help you threww terrible times that would be so fine!!
IF I COULD

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Re: If I Could (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:09:58 AM AEST
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i think this is a great poem for a beginner

Re: If I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:21:48 PM AEST
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this is a great poem for anyone.!

wildejohnny

Re: If I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:21:50 AM AEST
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Very Good! Liked It a Lot. Enjoyable Read! Look Forward To Reading More From You!
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Re: If I Could (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 04:14:22 AM AEST
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great really apealing for a child or parent

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