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and shower you with luv-
fret when your body's ill
hoping, praying, never giving up.

It's just my nature
so please forgive me
if I shower
your tender heart,
forgive me.

If I get carryed away
mezmerized with your heart,
embaress your ego
with cupids dart.

If I charm you
with my honest soul,
treat you in nothing but luv,
forgive as it's
all I know.

© Emy Star
30 Jun 2003

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FORGIVE ME?

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:36:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

If I care too much
and shower you with luv-
fret when your body's ill
hoping, praying, never giving up.

It's just my nature
so please forgive me
if I shower
your tender heart,
forgive me.

If I get carryed away
mezmerized with your heart,
embaress your ego
with cupids dart.

If I charm you
with my honest soul,
treat you in nothing but luv,
forgive as it's
all I know.

© Emy Star
30 Jun 2003

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2004-02-15 23:36:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:06:38 AM AEST
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In your words are found<br /> The beauty of a compassionate heart<br /> Tender and wise<br /> With wisdom to impart<br /> <br /> May God forgive us all<br /> It we have not the grace<br /> We find in the heart<br /> At Emmy Stars place !<br /> <br /> Excellent work emmy !---Russ<br /> <br />

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:57:48 AM AEST
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I don't think I know a single man that would not love that treatment. This is sweet, Emy. Good write.

Rainbows,
Rita

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:59:17 AM AEST
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NOW AREN'T YOU AN ANGEL SO SWEET
FROM HEARTBEAT TO HEARTBEAT! YOU IS
A VERY CARING GIRL WITH ALOT OF LOVE FOR THE WORLD!! BY THE WAY,YOUR POEM WAS FANTASTIC!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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Wow..beautiful poem..very sweet.
thanks for sharing this Emy..luv and hugs... venkat

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:26:07 AM AEST
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awesome write emy as always !! i really like your work !!

Peace

Jenna

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:29:48 AM AEST
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Aww...what a touching write. Good job here emy.

~blueheart

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:04:55 AM AEST
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Personally, I think any man who received that deep of love would be a fool to take it for granted. Nice write, Emy. I like this one a lot!

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:29:47 AM AEST
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Awesome write... fantastic job, Emmm
Hugs
Jenni

Re: FORGIVE ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:44:38 AM AEST
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Awwhhh...This is so loving and sweet. I love your style

Love Dawny x

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