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Array ( [sid] => 35131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reflection Of You [time] => 2004-02-15 19:14:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel alone here in thie dark place
And that's the way it will always be
Depression is the only thing I will ever know
Because you just don't get it, do you?
There will never be an answer, will there?
Because you just don't care
I loved you, trusted you
And this is what you've done to me
Is this what you planned all along?
This is how you probably wanted it to be
Why do I care?
You hurt me
Ripped my heart out and handed it back
I'll never love another for there's to much pain
I want to hate you but you know I can't
Expecting eveything to be ok, but it's not
And when they find out it's all a big lie
It makes you hurt inside
Makes you want to die
Makes you cry
Sometimes you just mess things up
I'll always be here, but you don't care [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PaygeTheAnarchist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Reflection Of You

Contributed by PaygeTheAnarchist on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:14:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel alone here in thie dark place
And that's the way it will always be
Depression is the only thing I will ever know
Because you just don't get it, do you?
There will never be an answer, will there?
Because you just don't care
I loved you, trusted you
And this is what you've done to me
Is this what you planned all along?
This is how you probably wanted it to be
Why do I care?
You hurt me
Ripped my heart out and handed it back
I'll never love another for there's to much pain
I want to hate you but you know I can't
Expecting eveything to be ok, but it's not
And when they find out it's all a big lie
It makes you hurt inside
Makes you want to die
Makes you cry
Sometimes you just mess things up
I'll always be here, but you don't care

Copyright © PaygeTheAnarchist ... [ 2004-02-15 19:14:44]
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Re: Reflection Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 08:58:05 PM AEST
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WOW !!! what emotion went into these writes, can i have some?? cause if you write like that with that kind of emotion then i need some too :) <br /> <br /> Really brilliant write your developing a fan <br /> pm me if things are getting ya down i need a new friend :D lol no (Well i do but yea) feel free to pm me with whatever hehe <br /> <br /> Luke

Re: Reflection Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:18:23 PM AEST
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So much pain found in your poem. Hang in there with the rest of us here at ypdc. Great poem. Kie

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