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Immortal in these words of gratitude
From the wraith of feeling tired
I move forth so uninspired

Fighting hard these demons plague
Delusional words that simmer vague
Eternal aching my mind so used
A broken sentence in time confused

Blocking is this barrier strong
My thoughts cant fathom at just how long
Silence is the key to pass
Sitting amongst tall trees and grass

This barrier fading, its slipping away
Emotional baggage that could not stay
Cocooned within, time will clock
As my thoughts consume poetry block [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 25 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Engulfing A Poetic Rancor

Contributed by forever_lonely on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Standing tall in timeless attitude
Immortal in these words of gratitude
From the wraith of feeling tired
I move forth so uninspired

Fighting hard these demons plague
Delusional words that simmer vague
Eternal aching my mind so used
A broken sentence in time confused

Blocking is this barrier strong
My thoughts cant fathom at just how long
Silence is the key to pass
Sitting amongst tall trees and grass

This barrier fading, its slipping away
Emotional baggage that could not stay
Cocooned within, time will clock
As my thoughts consume poetry block

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-02-15 19:12:05]
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Re: Engulfing A Poetic Rancor (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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Although your words were sad there is so much beauty in the way you display your words. From the title to the ending, perfection........Kie

Re: Engulfing A Poetic Rancor (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:24:44 PM AEST
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I wonder how many actually understood this one? I thoroughly enjoyed it, Luke. You get better with every write, and given how good this is, that's an enticing prospect indeed.<br /> <br /> Truly,<br /> -V.S.

Re: Engulfing A Poetic Rancor (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:38:39 AM AEST
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The sadness potrayed so well. This poem is on a whole new level. Great job Luke.

~blueheart

Re: Engulfing A Poetic Rancor (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:52:33 AM AEST
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Awesome write ... as these words convey exactly how I feel at present ... your talent shines without a doubt ... Jan

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