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Array ( [sid] => 35069 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CutiePie [time] => 2004-02-15 09:32:55 [hometext] => I'm sitting here, writing this Poem thinking about the one I love the most, who isnt well right now. Wish I could read this out to her :( I'm too scared to even show her this. I dont know how she might take it. I just hope she gets well, I love her a lot. [bodytext] => -----------------------------------------------------------

To You MY CUTIEPIE

Would you say no if I asked you for your hand
Could you believe in the same words that I don't understand?
And would you cry if I told you I must go
I've been waiting such a long, long time
I think I could stand you forever

I know there's something in the wake of your smile
I get a notion from the look in your eyes.
And there are voices that want to be heard.
So much to mention but can't find the words.
But, even though you're a joy to me
I think you think, "he's a bore to me"

I close my eyes and I see your face
Holding my heart in your hands
Still trying to understand.
It's worth the pain that makes the tears
It's worth the light of a million years
Only your love I can't explain
You are the flower for my rain

I found a Love that is so real
It fills me, dead right down to my heels
Never thought that I'd ever feel this way
My Love please stay.
I never knew I was in Love & this I can't deny
found someone who makes me smile
Butterflies Inside...
This feels so right
You've changed my life
Till the end, your name will touch my lips like praying
I'll be the keeper of the words your heart is saying. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 43 [informant] => The_Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
CutiePie

Contributed by The_Poet on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:32:55 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



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To You MY CUTIEPIE

Would you say no if I asked you for your hand
Could you believe in the same words that I don't understand?
And would you cry if I told you I must go
I've been waiting such a long, long time
I think I could stand you forever

I know there's something in the wake of your smile
I get a notion from the look in your eyes.
And there are voices that want to be heard.
So much to mention but can't find the words.
But, even though you're a joy to me
I think you think, "he's a bore to me"

I close my eyes and I see your face
Holding my heart in your hands
Still trying to understand.
It's worth the pain that makes the tears
It's worth the light of a million years
Only your love I can't explain
You are the flower for my rain

I found a Love that is so real
It fills me, dead right down to my heels
Never thought that I'd ever feel this way
My Love please stay.
I never knew I was in Love & this I can't deny
found someone who makes me smile
Butterflies Inside...
This feels so right
You've changed my life
Till the end, your name will touch my lips like praying
I'll be the keeper of the words your heart is saying.




Copyright © The_Poet ... [ 2004-02-15 09:32:55]
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Re: CutiePie (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 10:03:39 AM AEST
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This is gorgeous....


Re: CutiePie (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 10:48:14 AM AEST
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Very good write I hope the person gets to feeling better be it you or the one you wrote about. I hope you check out my latest two. Regards Wes...


Re: CutiePie (User Rating: 1 )
by niki on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:10:57 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem<br /> i think you shouldn't be scared<br /> i think you should give it <br /> to her.


Re: CutiePie (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:50:08 AM AEST
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Whoever you wrote this for is very lucky trust me..the poem is beautiful.


Re: CutiePie (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:49:54 AM AEST
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geat write!!! loved it. ivy




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