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Array ( [sid] => 35002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the people around me [time] => 2004-02-14 18:22:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Love, Life
Hate, and Decay
these are all that suit this life
no one cares anymore
For the ones who do, you're running a lost cause
This planet of dead souls is a disgrace to all who know of its existence

The morals I hold so high get walked on every day, so why
Why can't I throw them away
Why can't I just let them go
banish them from my mind

Yes I am the one I pity
I am the one that is watching and can't act
I see all of your broken promises
And I see all of the times you cheat
No matter how big or small

But I can't act on them
Would you even listen if I asked you to
Do you actually care if you hurt that person?
If you tear out their soul and stab it?
Do you care?

Or are you so cold that you look past it?
Like ice on glass, you're transparent, but still can't be seen though
You all make me sick, and we all decay together in this pit of hell
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => driping_blood [notes] => (Edited by Mod 1, Mod 7 as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

the people around me

Contributed by driping_blood on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 06:22:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Love, Life
Hate, and Decay
these are all that suit this life
no one cares anymore
For the ones who do, you're running a lost cause
This planet of dead souls is a disgrace to all who know of its existence

The morals I hold so high get walked on every day, so why
Why can't I throw them away
Why can't I just let them go
banish them from my mind

Yes I am the one I pity
I am the one that is watching and can't act
I see all of your broken promises
And I see all of the times you cheat
No matter how big or small

But I can't act on them
Would you even listen if I asked you to
Do you actually care if you hurt that person?
If you tear out their soul and stab it?
Do you care?

Or are you so cold that you look past it?
Like ice on glass, you're transparent, but still can't be seen though
You all make me sick, and we all decay together in this pit of hell

Copyright © driping_blood ... [ 2004-02-14 18:22:24]
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Re: the people around me (User Rating: 1 )
by driping_blood on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 07:34:20 PM AEST
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i havent been on lately between work, magic, school and learning drums
i havent had time to write anything but i have finally found time, somewear?

hope u like it leave a comment if u like.

Re: the people around me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 10:13:54 PM AEST
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i loved this the anger dripping off its sides was beautiful. I loved it the anger made me smile. Great write.

Bobo (Joel)

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