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Array ( [sid] => 34942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy, I Still Love You [time] => 2004-02-14 03:14:36 [hometext] => I wrote this for my dad - if he ever read it, he'd never understand... [bodytext] => Why have you hurt me so much?
All I wanted was to feel your touch,
To know that you loved me,
To feel like I was a part of your family!
I shared with you my hurt,
But you never knew what to say.
When I needed you the most,
You were even farther away.
I held out my arms to you,
But only got a quick pat or two.
Don’t you understand?
Why didn’t you ever take my hand?
Why weren’t you there?
You didn’t have just a few minutes to spare?
I sure wish you’d show
The love I was never able to know.
But Daddy, I still love you
Despite all the hurtful things you do.
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Daddy, I Still Love You

Contributed by Kilikina on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:14:36 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why have you hurt me so much?
All I wanted was to feel your touch,
To know that you loved me,
To feel like I was a part of your family!
I shared with you my hurt,
But you never knew what to say.
When I needed you the most,
You were even farther away.
I held out my arms to you,
But only got a quick pat or two.
Don’t you understand?
Why didn’t you ever take my hand?
Why weren’t you there?
You didn’t have just a few minutes to spare?
I sure wish you’d show
The love I was never able to know.
But Daddy, I still love you
Despite all the hurtful things you do.

Copyright Â© Kilikina ... [ 2004-02-14 03:14:36]
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Re: Daddy, I Still Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:32:38 AM AEST
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I hope it gets better for you.I hate you feel so much pain.Awesome poem though.Full of vivid emotions.

Brian

Re: Daddy, I Still Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:32:09 PM AEST
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GOD BLESS,

GET GOD IN YOUR LIFE. GOD WILL NEVER LET YOU DOWN. HE WILL ALWAYS BE THERE FOR YOU. HE WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU OR FORSAKE YOU. HE WILL GIVE YOU ALL THE LOVE AND THEN SOME.

Re: Daddy, I Still Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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this was very sad and I know the last thing u needed was the need to get God bashed over yer head. I hope u find peace in yer life and that he accepts you.

Bobo (Joel)

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