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Array ( [sid] => 34907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friends make a difference [time] => 2004-02-13 23:12:06 [hometext] => A few times I felt so alone and a friend has been there in the nic of time! [bodytext] =>
A moment stirred
An echo heard
I await the ending of my pain

A silent cry
Another day goes by
And nothing to have gain

A moments notice
A knock on the door
My head tilts toward the floor

It’s the final hour
And a friend walks in
Keeping me from acting a unforgiving sin

On my face
No room for a smile
I only see another day
And walk another mile

This road I walk
Unfriendly and sad
Is of experiences that were bad

Now a friend is here
And my heart sees light
Thankful to him
I will sleep another night

The sun again rises
Another day is here
And there are no echo’s in my ear

I seem to have a feeling
Coming from deep inside
A feeling that says
I must no-longer hide

I cry no more
Neither will I have thoughts in vain
I believe an end has come to my pain

So thank you friend
For your knock on my door
You have given me hope
And hunger for so much more

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 367 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Waynster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Friends make a difference

Contributed by Waynster on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

A moment stirred
An echo heard
I await the ending of my pain

A silent cry
Another day goes by
And nothing to have gain

A moments notice
A knock on the door
My head tilts toward the floor

It’s the final hour
And a friend walks in
Keeping me from acting a unforgiving sin

On my face
No room for a smile
I only see another day
And walk another mile

This road I walk
Unfriendly and sad
Is of experiences that were bad

Now a friend is here
And my heart sees light
Thankful to him
I will sleep another night

The sun again rises
Another day is here
And there are no echo’s in my ear

I seem to have a feeling
Coming from deep inside
A feeling that says
I must no-longer hide

I cry no more
Neither will I have thoughts in vain
I believe an end has come to my pain

So thank you friend
For your knock on my door
You have given me hope
And hunger for so much more

Copyright Â© Waynster ... [ 2004-02-13 23:12:06]
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Re: Friends make a difference (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:22:58 PM AEST
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This is really very good. I like the style. I'm glad your friend was there for you.
Jenni

Re: Friends make a difference (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:48:38 AM AEST
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It almost sounds as if I was suicidal, but I am and was not. What was being talked about in this poem was my inner feelings and How I was lost and had no idea if i would do something stupid. I was cold and lonely. At one of the lowest times in my life, a friend just happened to step in when I was at my lowest moment. Not sure what I would have done, but I know that at that point, he gave me some good advice and it changed my world.

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