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[aid] => mick
[title] => I forgot to tell you I loved you
[time] => 2004-02-13 18:47:55
[hometext] => Well this one I wrote for a thread in the forum, kinda sad
[bodytext] => I’m lingering here, letting tears fall unhindered,
Just received your message, leaving me so soured,
Uninvited memories are taking control of my mind,
Still can’t believe you have left our friendship behind,
Once I craved to reveal my flowering soul to you,
It pained me so much to conceal a feeling so true,
Falling in love with you was never my intention,
How could I resist you after giving me so much attention?,
But my courage faulted every time you got near,
Never imagined that cowardice would cost me so dear,
“I fell in love with a girl” once you eagerly told me,
“Oh congratulations” was my reply, hating myself for sounding raspy,
After so many years you’re inviting me to your wedding, how will I survive?
Can’t afford to look at you and bring back feelings that once were so alive
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 350
[topic] => 24
[informant] => Necromant
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 28
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LoveRemembered
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I forgot to tell you I loved you
Contributed by
Necromant
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 06:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I’m lingering here, letting tears fall unhindered,
Just received your message, leaving me so soured,
Uninvited memories are taking control of my mind,
Still can’t believe you have left our friendship behind,
Once I craved to reveal my flowering soul to you,
It pained me so much to conceal a feeling so true,
Falling in love with you was never my intention,
How could I resist you after giving me so much attention?,
But my courage faulted every time you got near,
Never imagined that cowardice would cost me so dear,
“I fell in love with a girl” once you eagerly told me,
“Oh congratulations” was my reply, hating myself for sounding raspy,
After so many years you’re inviting me to your wedding, how will I survive?
Can’t afford to look at you and bring back feelings that once were so alive
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-02-13 18:47:55]
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:12:55 PM AEST
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*Applauds*
I like this one alot, so sad....
Kie |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:35:46 PM AEST
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| this is always the problem- when the person was with us, we are too shy or scared to say or do anything, but after they are gone or taken, we cries our heart out..... a very very very touching poem...... |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful and sad write .. its so very true cuz this happens to alot of us.. someone has a gf or something but they are closer to you and you never speak up or your life gets busy and lose touch then you find out they are married or have a gf which is worse especailly when you are close .. awesome write
Peace
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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| equisitly beautiful, wow, ouch too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by TantricMoon on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:32:01 AM AEST
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| Sadly beautiful ... very well written. |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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ouch this is really painful.. i think the first and last lines of this are my favourite, they hold a lot of meaning (for me anyway). Good write, i'm sure you'll get through it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:42:59 PM AEST
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| bleeqqq what an ugly poem |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by tatortot on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:25:52 PM AEST
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such a sad poem, but its nicely written, and beautiful, and really true. great job.
tatortot |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:31:31 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, and so beautiful. an amazing expression of feelings. luv phil xxx |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:22:36 PM AEST
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Wow, this one is seriously sad . . . I like it. I like it a lot. Nicely done, great job *beats self over the head for not seeking out more of your poems to read* Well, that'll soon be remedied *trots off to see what else Anne's written*
--Nora |
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Re: I forgot to tell you I loved you
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:56:07 AM AEST
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| WOW!!! You have no idea how much i can relate to this..... im there with ya .... maybe it just wasnt meant to be thats what i tell myself ..... |
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