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If I could leap up and touch the sky,
If I would always break down and cry,
If I could tie the perfect tie,
would you notice me?

If I brushed my hair a different way,
If I always knew the right words to say,
If I got down on my knees to pray,
would you notice me?

If I could make a sick child well,
If I could shout with the loudest yell,
If to the devil my soul I could sell,
would you notice me?

If I painted my nails and shiny, bright pink,
If I could tell the thoughts you think,
if my eyes changed colors everytime I blinked,
would you notice me?

I would try these things, don't you see?
But I definitely won't beg and plead.
Someday, maybe mine you will be.
Until then, I'll wish you'd notice me.

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Would You Notice Me?

Contributed by jazz on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:10:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I could leap up and touch the sky,
If I would always break down and cry,
If I could tie the perfect tie,
would you notice me?

If I brushed my hair a different way,
If I always knew the right words to say,
If I got down on my knees to pray,
would you notice me?

If I could make a sick child well,
If I could shout with the loudest yell,
If to the devil my soul I could sell,
would you notice me?

If I painted my nails and shiny, bright pink,
If I could tell the thoughts you think,
if my eyes changed colors everytime I blinked,
would you notice me?

I would try these things, don't you see?
But I definitely won't beg and plead.
Someday, maybe mine you will be.
Until then, I'll wish you'd notice me.

Copyright © jazz ... [ 2004-02-13 13:10:55]
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Re: Would You Notice Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by harmoni on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:29:07 PM AEST
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NICE POEM

Re: Would You Notice Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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I could relate to this, I have been there. You have so much talent and you express yourself really well. I liked this one alot. ((5)) all the way! Kie

Re: Would You Notice Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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Lovely write...can identify..
Jenni

Re: Would You Notice Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:54:31 PM AEST
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awww! how sweet!! i hope that that special one does notice you, maybe if you trip into them *something i would do* lol, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Would You Notice Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:48:19 PM AEST
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Nice write sweetie ! Loved the "If my eyes changed colors everytime I blinked,would you notice me".I as well can relate and it's nice to know that a person's poetry can somehow become a friend of ours,someone who is living the same period and telling us we're not alone.Nicely done,
PumpkinPie

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