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[aid] => mick
[title] => To Whom It Concerns
[time] => 2004-02-13 12:52:04
[hometext] => The RIGHT version....
[bodytext] => To whom it concerns,
I'm only 22.
I'm young enough to cry,
and old enough to be blue.
To whom it concerns,
I'm not tall and thin.
Nobody likes fat people,
so I don't have many friends.
To whom it concerns,
I try to be bold,
but I still have nothing.
I'm lonely and cold.
To whom it concerns,
life's just not fair.
I'm in complete hell.
I just thought I'd share.
I'm afraid of rejection,
afraid of getting burned.
I just thought I'd mention it,
to whom it concerns.
02-12-04
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[counter] => 270
[topic] => 48
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[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
To Whom It Concerns
Contributed by
jazz
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:52:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To whom it concerns,
I'm only 22.
I'm young enough to cry,
and old enough to be blue.
To whom it concerns,
I'm not tall and thin.
Nobody likes fat people,
so I don't have many friends.
To whom it concerns,
I try to be bold,
but I still have nothing.
I'm lonely and cold.
To whom it concerns,
life's just not fair.
I'm in complete hell.
I just thought I'd share.
I'm afraid of rejection,
afraid of getting burned.
I just thought I'd mention it,
to whom it concerns.
02-12-04
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jazz
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2004-02-13 12:52:04]
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by intelectualpoet on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:55:11 PM AEST
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Jazz, Sweetie. I don't care if your 110 pounds or 1000 pounds. It's whats inside that matters to me. The next Time you get on AIM my S/N os BMW4L1F3 or intelectualpoet I want to talk to you and get to know you better
I loved the poem though, hopefully it will open up a lot of peoples eyes.
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by harmoni on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:23:34 PM AEST
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AT ONE TIME IN MY I FELT THE SAME.
TAKE IT FROM A OLD LADY.
THERE IS SOMEONE OUT THERE FOR
YOU .
WILL THINK YOUR GREAT .
SO DON'T GIVE UP .
DON'T THROW IN THE TOWEL YET .
GREAT POEM |
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:37:10 PM AEST
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| Oh Jazz this just hit me at my core. When I was growing up, I thought I was an ugly bean pole. I hated everything about me. I had to learn to love who I am, me--Kie. It is whats inside that really counts because even the most beautiful people, will not always be beautiful....Kie |
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:41:00 PM AEST
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Oh Jazz.... This is an awesome write.... So sad that you feel this way, but YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL..... inside beauty is what counts.... and you shouldn't worry too much about what others think...Love yourself...and others will love you..
Jenni |
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by Dawny on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:34:09 PM AEST
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True friends will see the beauty inside, and the way you write is beautiful.
Love Dawny x
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Re: To Whom It Concerns
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST
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Dearest Jazz,
I do hope you will come to realize that beauty is in the eye of the beholder.There is nothing as the right term of "beautiful" because it's different for every person,luckily !Coming to terms with the person you are,loving that person and respecting it even through it's worst side,is the best gift you could ever ever give yourself.You gain confidence,assurance and become even more beautiful than you already are.I don't know about your faith in God,but you are His child,His image,just think how beautiful that is !God is perfect,He doesn't make errors on his creations.If you were to die tomorrow,you would want people to remember your heart,if only EVERYONE could understand these words.I may be going too far with my words of wisdom,lol,but I thought I'd tell you that loving yourself makes everything in life so much easier.Trust me,I've been through it.You expressed yourself really well(once again)and I only hope my words will have some kind of impact on you because I'm sure you already are beautiful inside and out.
PumpkinPie |
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