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[aid] => mick
[title] => A fairy tale gone wrong
[time] => 2004-02-13 01:38:15
[hometext] => i tyred my hardest not to cry...but i couldn't help it and that was the day i lost my love
[bodytext] => We were the perfect couple It seemed like we were together for ever we didn't think anything would ever tare us apart we weren't just in love with each other... we loved each other it was just me...me and my man two people so in love they we inseparable spent day and night together after a while you would think we would run out of things to talk about but no...not us we were different we could just sit and cuddle for hours and talk and they called it puppy-love but we knew they were wrong it was the real thing but then one day something unexpectedly happened it was a fairy-tale gone wrong he came to me one day... eyes so teary he said he had to leave town and me not knowing clearly what he meant just said "OK, when will you be back?" and then he broke those heart taring words to me he said "I'm sorry...but this time i wont return" i tyred my hardest not to cry...but i couldn't help it and that was the day i lost my love he told me that him and his family had to move he begged to stay but there was nothing more he could do... i understood...as much as i didn't want this to happen...it still was going to and then we decided to do the hardest thing in the world he was leaving and i would be left behind and as much as i loved him...i didn't want to hold him back and as much as he loved me...he had to let me free so we both sat there tears violently running down our cheeks as he held me tight and we told each other how much we loved one another and he said he could never forget me and that we would always keep in touch and at that moment we broke up because i knew he would find someone else where he was going as much as he loved me it was bound to happen and he knew that i would need someone near me to, not knowing he would always be so we spent our last night together... half the time spent just wiping away tears and at that time we knew how it felt to know longer be living... so dead inside and then the next day when he left we cryed our hearts out it was our first day alone in years but when he got to where he was going he called me right away and we talked forever...or so it seemed and this went on daily for days and then those days turned to months and then those months turned to years but then one day he didn't call and one day went on to two and sooner two became three and never again did i hear his voice and i thought this meant that he just found someone new but no...he never could...and neither could i he killed himself because he couldn't live without me and after i was just finally starting to recover i was dead inside once again then i realized i couldn't take anymore pain... i killed myself that night because i couldn't live without him and hours later i met him in the sky at those great golden gates and though we left so many others in that pain we couldn't take we had to be together again forever and no one could tear us apart though on different nights... and different times we had killed ourselves never to return and we did this all... for the LOVE [comments] => 2 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 22 [informant] => echomywurdz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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