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inside the darkest places
within your soul they hide

Nagging and haunting
to come out to the open

Each day living on is
harder than your last

These secrets you will carry to your grave
You cannot feel secure until they lie to rest

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Secrets and lies

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:58:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Secrets and lies
inside the darkest places
within your soul they hide

Nagging and haunting
to come out to the open

Each day living on is
harder than your last

These secrets you will carry to your grave
You cannot feel secure until they lie to rest

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2004-02-13 00:58:34]
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Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:26:43 AM AEST
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haunting hard way to live bottling all that stuff inside but seems like alot of people do this all the time makes one wonder how well we really know someone Im finding out the hard way.
michelle

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by niki on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 05:09:31 PM AEST
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i thought it was really good

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:10:02 PM AEST
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I think its very good! It has a lot of truthful meaning! I liked it! Great write!
Anne :D

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:07:07 PM AEST
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i thought it was great, awesome write. look forward to more of your work

Arden

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:58:50 PM AEST
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I think it's good. People shouldn't keep their emotions bottled up. You did an excellent job. *S* Cynthia

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:19:07 PM AEST
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true, but they make interesting poetry:P hugs n' love nessa

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:21:47 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. Sometimes things pop into your head that turn out to be marvelous!

Re: Secrets and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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I think it's good. Once again you display a comand not only of the written word but of the thruth and at times the unforseen hurt these words tell of. Great writting as usual your in true poetic form.

myheartsvoice

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