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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Hate your face
[time] => 2004-02-13 00:25:46
[hometext] => For every lie and bad thing that you have done. I hope you read this. I hope it makes you choke. 'I don't want you back'
[bodytext] => Sometimes I look back
and I think how you've
hurt me like you have.
I want you to know
just how much I hate you.
Your lying cheating ass
really disgusts me now.
For every time you said
forever we will be together
and for every single
oh I can't live without you.
Now isn't it funny that
you're still breathing?
For when you got down
on one knee and asked me
to marry you.
Should have kicked you
right then and there.
So now you're going away
and so want to be friends.
For this I get to tell you no.
Isn't it ironic?
Doesn't it just suck?
So now I turn my back.
So now just go away.
Go on get lost *****.
Damn how I hate your face.
Raven's Sin
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 224
[topic] => 43
[informant] => Cobalt
[notes] =>
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 3
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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Hate your face
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:25:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sometimes I look back
and I think how you've
hurt me like you have.
I want you to know
just how much I hate you.
Your lying cheating ass
really disgusts me now.
For every time you said
forever we will be together
and for every single
oh I can't live without you.
Now isn't it funny that
you're still breathing?
For when you got down
on one knee and asked me
to marry you.
Should have kicked you
right then and there.
So now you're going away
and so want to be friends.
For this I get to tell you no.
Isn't it ironic?
Doesn't it just suck?
So now I turn my back.
So now just go away.
Go on get lost *****.
Damn how I hate your face.
Raven's Sin
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Cobalt
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Re: Hate your face
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:01:12 AM AEST
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wow you can feel the anger and regret in this poem.. ITs an awesome right and i can definately relate.. i also hate my ex and hate his face .. so I definately can understand this .. You should be glad they are out of your life.. THings can only get better from here.. there is always hope and i hope you feel better now
Peace and hope
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Re: Hate your face
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:40:50 AM AEST
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I liked this man. The anger that seeped out was amazing and very real. I think most can relate to the lost relationships deal.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Hate your face
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:54:36 AM AEST
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| Lots of anger and deep hurt expressed in this poem. My heart goes out to you. I know it must be a difficult time. Another well composed write. Hang in there. Kie |
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Re: Hate your face
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:24:35 AM AEST
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I have someone whose face I hate as well... for many of the same reasons. Another awesome write, I know the feeling, the anger and disgust.
~ Moonlit
(thanks for the comment on find me in the moonlight, btw - I always like seeing new comments on older poems!) |
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Re: Hate your face
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by Aika on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:46:46 AM AEST
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very nice, very real
but still you should forgive..
love, aika:-) |
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Re: Hate your face
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:06:59 AM AEST
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Wow the anger seeped through the words in this poem
Life can be cruel some times and there is always one to hurt in a broken relationship
Better she is going away then you can move on in your life
It will get better it always does
Great poem
Take care
Love Sweet angel ukxxx |
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Re: Hate your face
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:40:02 PM AEST
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What great emotion kept within these words
, angers true form, i really felt the pain and anger left within these words truely masterful
Luke |
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Re: Hate your face
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:12:56 PM AEST
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Geeze this poem emanets (grr how's written) hate, pain and anger. I liked the way you wrote it, described your feelings very clearly, I hope this poem isn't part of your life (or was). AMazing write as usual!! Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Hate your face
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by Jolly on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:17:47 PM AEST
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| this I understand..lol...it's clear. You got dumped. you didn't like it, but know what...you need to get over it. She has taken your power away..what a shame...what a *****...and what a woos you are for showing her that kind of poetry so she know she has that power. Man you aren't very smart; but then you're a man...with a name like cobalt I'd expect more...has there been a meltdown???? rotflmao |
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Re: Hate your face
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by RochelleLloyd on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:53:06 AM AEST
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| I So Enjoyed This Write!!! Great Job! |
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