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Array ( [sid] => 34783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Now your gone [time] => 2004-02-12 21:42:35 [hometext] => I left my heart with the roses. Did you even bother to throw them away? [bodytext] => When she left my life was done
Reality shattered like hit by a gun
Where once was heaven now lies hell
The only place I had to dwell

It hurt me when you left me sitting there
I wonder now did you even care
I fell in love now who’s to blame
Damn my heart and your sick game

I feel among the many dead
Did you even lift you head
No you didn’t even care
This pain is too much to bear

You said you loved me so I believed your lie
Now I wish to god I could die
Left alone out of place
And you’re gone without a trace

The roses I bought lay on the floor
Left outside your angelic door
I want to know did you care
Or do they still simply lie there
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Now your gone

Contributed by Shadow on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When she left my life was done
Reality shattered like hit by a gun
Where once was heaven now lies hell
The only place I had to dwell

It hurt me when you left me sitting there
I wonder now did you even care
I fell in love now who’s to blame
Damn my heart and your sick game

I feel among the many dead
Did you even lift you head
No you didn’t even care
This pain is too much to bear

You said you loved me so I believed your lie
Now I wish to god I could die
Left alone out of place
And you’re gone without a trace

The roses I bought lay on the floor
Left outside your angelic door
I want to know did you care
Or do they still simply lie there

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-02-12 21:42:35]
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Re: Now your gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece, the imagery of roses being thrown away is so like a broken heart. Hope you're not feeling this way on Valentine's Day.

Re: Now your gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:16:04 PM AEST
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Very well written. beautiful wording.

Re: Now your gone (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:12:00 AM AEST
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very sad and touching write.. left me in awe.. I can understand this feeling.. it sux when love isn't returned or ignored.. beatiful write!

Peace

JENNA

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