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[aid] => mick
[title] => How do you feel?
[time] => 2004-02-12 18:59:17
[hometext] => This is a very serious poem by me i posted it in a forum at first but thought that it would be a good idea to share with you all please please comment i would love to hear your views, on the subject and the poem also :)
[bodytext] => A crying child, lost and ashamed His empty voice left with no name A silent tear strikes the ground Crashing through without a sound Upon his head an angel lies As his soul just cries and cries She whispers life in his heart of pain To realise it was all in vein A crashing thud, his fathers here Calls his boy to clamber near A drunken swing, a liquid kick The boy so hurt is sick and sick The boy runs far, to bed with he But the end its never now to be His father follows, he has no use This boy will meet a new abuse Years do pass this boy lived on Strong within, he sings a song 'Im to blame its all my fault I could not bring him to a Halt' This boy now man, can take no more His emotions lost, the final score Hes a cannon, lost and loose So he dies around the noose. All beause of his father abuse This poor boy felt he had no use He took his life, from guilt not real The question I ask, 'how do you feel?' [comments] => 4 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 39 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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