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Array ( [sid] => 34734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => White Roses [time] => 2004-02-12 14:25:51 [hometext] => kind of a dark goodbye to an estranged love [bodytext] => Bitterness eclipses me
like purebred insecurties,
the presence of you, wanders
from my grave

In this cocoon I sleep
wonder if I'll find peace?
Lying here in casket dreams
smile washes over me

White roses in a bloody vase
I see that look of pain
on your face
Why do you look for help within
my eyes?
Your souls existence is what I
despise

Penance seeks no mercy here
buried alive with all my fears
So please take your pity with you
when you go,
I don't want you here
Covered by forgotten fields
under this soil I am sealed
Even you can't reach me
in this chamber

So now what will you do
now that you have no one to
put through the ***** you put
me through?
Save your tears for someone
who cares,
not me

White roses in a bloody vase
you have fallen from my grace
Pick yourself up and carry on
by my side, no more, be
forever gone

White roses in a bloody vase
I see that look of pain
on your face
Why do you look for help
within my eyes?
Your souls existence is what
I despise

As you turn to leave,
for the last time you say goodbye
to me
I hope this is the last
of you I will ever see,
no more haunting my
thoughts and dreams

White roses in a bloody vase
stay away from my sacred place
The earth is my final home
while my body rests my spirit
will roam

by; Jeremiah D. Normich
( The Wordsmith ) [comments] => 6 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 34 [informant] => PoeticRequiem [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
White Roses

Contributed by PoeticRequiem on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 02:25:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Bitterness eclipses me
like purebred insecurties,
the presence of you, wanders
from my grave

In this cocoon I sleep
wonder if I'll find peace?
Lying here in casket dreams
smile washes over me

White roses in a bloody vase
I see that look of pain
on your face
Why do you look for help within
my eyes?
Your souls existence is what I
despise

Penance seeks no mercy here
buried alive with all my fears
So please take your pity with you
when you go,
I don't want you here
Covered by forgotten fields
under this soil I am sealed
Even you can't reach me
in this chamber

So now what will you do
now that you have no one to
put through the ***** you put
me through?
Save your tears for someone
who cares,
not me

White roses in a bloody vase
you have fallen from my grace
Pick yourself up and carry on
by my side, no more, be
forever gone

White roses in a bloody vase
I see that look of pain
on your face
Why do you look for help
within my eyes?
Your souls existence is what
I despise

As you turn to leave,
for the last time you say goodbye
to me
I hope this is the last
of you I will ever see,
no more haunting my
thoughts and dreams

White roses in a bloody vase
stay away from my sacred place
The earth is my final home
while my body rests my spirit
will roam

by; Jeremiah D. Normich
( The Wordsmith )




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Re: White Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 02:38:43 PM AEST
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aw i love this its great.


Re: White Roses (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:46:19 PM AEST
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that was really good


Re: White Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:54:37 PM AEST
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Nice, nice, nice, i know what that feels like.


Re: White Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:51:46 PM AEST
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Ooooh, quite dark, very enjoyable read.


Re: White Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by AsrealTheFallen10 on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:33:07 PM AEST
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I like it.


Re: White Roses (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:55:50 PM AEST
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I love this. I would like to ask you for permission to use the first 3-4 verses in an acoustic song I am writing. PLease contact me at theperfectfuneral@yahoo.com or PerfectFuneral on aim with the answer and i can send you a copy of the song if it is a yes.thanks -Craig




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