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Array ( [sid] => 34652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Like I did with you [time] => 2004-02-11 20:46:34 [hometext] => I hope you guys can relate to this poem/rap that is so dear to my heart [bodytext] => I now realize, some people just don't compromise
Look into my eyes
And stop tellin' lies
I should've been more wise
You're not like a lot of guys
But it seems that we're in a suffering paradise
This all seemed so real
Now I'm not sure how I really feel
And I know that it's gonna take some time for my heart to heal
You're gonna have to apologize, so get down and neel
And say you're sorry for what you said
I know this craziness isn't just in my head
You should've kept your mouth shut, but instead
Everything you said, is still stuck in my head
When I lay in my bed
That's all I think about
I'm not gonna shout
I need to get you out
I'm tired of thinking about the same things that aren't mine
So please be kind
And rewind
Just forget about me, and I'll forget about you
Do you think that this is the right thing to do?
It better, because I don't want to lose
And choose
The wrongs things
Like I did with you

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Like I did with you

Contributed by dizzi_lashes on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:46:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I now realize, some people just don't compromise
Look into my eyes
And stop tellin' lies
I should've been more wise
You're not like a lot of guys
But it seems that we're in a suffering paradise
This all seemed so real
Now I'm not sure how I really feel
And I know that it's gonna take some time for my heart to heal
You're gonna have to apologize, so get down and neel
And say you're sorry for what you said
I know this craziness isn't just in my head
You should've kept your mouth shut, but instead
Everything you said, is still stuck in my head
When I lay in my bed
That's all I think about
I'm not gonna shout
I need to get you out
I'm tired of thinking about the same things that aren't mine
So please be kind
And rewind
Just forget about me, and I'll forget about you
Do you think that this is the right thing to do?
It better, because I don't want to lose
And choose
The wrongs things
Like I did with you





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Re: Like I did with you (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:08:12 PM AEST
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If only the life can be that simply- rewind and forget, but too bad, it doesn't... oh well, at least you can try.... hope you get over this whatever-it-is soon......


Re: Like I did with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:39:37 PM AEST
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Love can make us do unusual, sometimes bad things. The way I see it, if it was true love, then neither would put the other in danger... Also, it's too bad we cannot rewind back a few minutes, hrs, etc... The world might be a better place...

Jazz




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