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Array ( [sid] => 34642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is Forever [time] => 2004-02-11 19:15:41 [hometext] => Just something I made up when I was bored in Geometry class...Not sure if its good or not...feel like somethings missing but anyway pls comment [bodytext] => This is the time when
Shove turns to love.
Hate is the final
State of their mind.

Your feelings can't comprehend
Everything you're dealing
All of these emotions can't
Be cured by some love postion

This is when you feel like dying
But you're really flying above everyone else
And they're all falling down
While calling your name

This is where you start
Deep inside his heartSo long it seems like a coma
You leave him scars

Just by the stars that fill your eyes
All of your tears seem to like him alot
He conquers all of your fears
And says you will always be in his arms

He takes your hurt
And the pain of this world
He turns your anger into
Everything you love

This is when all the truth
Comes out in the lies that aren't there.
Everyone tries to be as lucky as you
Because you will always love him

This is the storm
In which he shelters you.
This is the full effect.
This is forever. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mygurl1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
This is Forever

Contributed by mygurl1989 on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



This is the time when
Shove turns to love.
Hate is the final
State of their mind.

Your feelings can't comprehend
Everything you're dealing
All of these emotions can't
Be cured by some love postion

This is when you feel like dying
But you're really flying above everyone else
And they're all falling down
While calling your name

This is where you start
Deep inside his heartSo long it seems like a coma
You leave him scars

Just by the stars that fill your eyes
All of your tears seem to like him alot
He conquers all of your fears
And says you will always be in his arms

He takes your hurt
And the pain of this world
He turns your anger into
Everything you love

This is when all the truth
Comes out in the lies that aren't there.
Everyone tries to be as lucky as you
Because you will always love him

This is the storm
In which he shelters you.
This is the full effect.
This is forever.




Copyright © mygurl1989 ... [ 2004-02-11 19:15:41]
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Re: This is Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:39:23 PM AEST
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The final verse totally kicks ass...this is a really good write. You'll truly be lucky if you can find such a person as this who can heal you.




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