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Array ( [sid] => 34639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thrusting sense of torture [time] => 2004-02-11 19:01:37 [hometext] => this was meant to be a dark death like poem but i guess by the end it had a gross twist......... [bodytext] => I open my mouth to take my last gasp
but the air i breath is toxicating
His scent is now filling the air
As his hand falls hard straight upon my face

I try grabbing for the nearest object
To fight away the evil soul above
the one that has me held down tight
To a bed of sharp rose thorns not petals

Your thrusting me in a sense of torture
Hoping to hear my silent screams of pain
the blood that drips from within me
Coats his skin without any small trace

He licks the wound i placed upon his face
with my one last hope that I may escape
With one firm push my pain seeps through
Till my body falls beneath him still

I lie there desperate for one last chance
But my lungs wont work, I am frozen cold
Left for the voltures of the world
behold the remains of his evil soul [comments] => 8 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 13 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

thrusting sense of torture

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I open my mouth to take my last gasp
but the air i breath is toxicating
His scent is now filling the air
As his hand falls hard straight upon my face

I try grabbing for the nearest object
To fight away the evil soul above
the one that has me held down tight
To a bed of sharp rose thorns not petals

Your thrusting me in a sense of torture
Hoping to hear my silent screams of pain
the blood that drips from within me
Coats his skin without any small trace

He licks the wound i placed upon his face
with my one last hope that I may escape
With one firm push my pain seeps through
Till my body falls beneath him still

I lie there desperate for one last chance
But my lungs wont work, I am frozen cold
Left for the voltures of the world
behold the remains of his evil soul

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-02-11 19:01:37]
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Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:11:25 PM AEST
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Hey tam this is a brilliant write really full of emotion and imagery teehee

Great write hun

Luke x

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:25:17 PM AEST
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Oh what a dark poem! Full of very vivid description, this poem emantes lot of pain! I really loved it! its written magnificantly! You have great talent keep it up!
Anne :D

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:21:46 PM AEST
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chillingly vivid, hugs n' love nessa

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:37:44 PM AEST
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great imagery ...emotional write

Shari

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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Very, very nice. Can't recall you ever writing anything like this before.

"Your thrusting me in a sense of torture
Hoping to hear my silent screams of pain
the blood that drips from within me
Coats his skin without any small trace"

Yeah, I loved that one!

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:22:49 AM AEST
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Well now I understand a lot better what rape victims and "unwilling partners" go through.
You paint a vivid picture

Normally I avoid this type of poem being well passed the age for this type of trauma (but
I do remember wat it was like as you can see from some of my poems) However I'm glad I read it.

I'd put it very near the top of the list for poemsof this type.that we get on YPDC.

bob

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:29:49 AM AEST
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Wow.. feelings and emotions I have felt myself before. and wow a great poet able to put words down like this. God has a gave you a talent. and helping you . sandy

Re: thrusting sense of torture (User Rating: 1 )
by L-Dee on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:40:51 PM AEST
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Excellent poems, maybe you will enjoy reading one of mine... Well donex

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