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Array ( [sid] => 34622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOST SOULS [time] => 2004-02-11 14:52:28 [hometext] => JUST FLOWED OUT, WHEN WATCHING SOME PEOPLE BATTLE WITH THEIR DAYS [bodytext] => mirror, mirror on the wall who has gone and taken your souls
so much sadness, so much pain
can your life really be in vain
your thoughts leave me breathless wanting to cry.
so much anger, hurt and strain.
open a window open a door let the light in
be in darkness no more.
this life is your oyster, open the door let the light in, be in darkness no more.
the wind in your hair the breeze on your face open the door be in darkness no more, the warm summer sun, the bright summer sky come away from your sadness, come away from your pain.
open your heart let your soul shine again
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LOST SOULS

Contributed by rie on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 02:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

mirror, mirror on the wall who has gone and taken your souls
so much sadness, so much pain
can your life really be in vain
your thoughts leave me breathless wanting to cry.
so much anger, hurt and strain.
open a window open a door let the light in
be in darkness no more.
this life is your oyster, open the door let the light in, be in darkness no more.
the wind in your hair the breeze on your face open the door be in darkness no more, the warm summer sun, the bright summer sky come away from your sadness, come away from your pain.
open your heart let your soul shine again

Copyright © rie ... [ 2004-02-11 14:52:28]
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Re: LOST SOULS (User Rating: 1 )
by orangeangel on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:28:06 PM AEST
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nice poem

Re: LOST SOULS (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:55:05 PM AEST
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Oh I loved the faerie tale begining and the the harsh truth bitterness continuation. Very well written, liked the style keep it up!
Anne :D

Re: LOST SOULS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 06:08:33 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Rie...... keep them coming...
Jenni

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