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Array ( [sid] => 34586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => floating in the dark [time] => 2004-02-11 05:26:07 [hometext] => It's a little something i wrote in a few minute :) [bodytext] => As I dream of your lips floating down my neck
I know I shall no longer have you to depend
for the times when i could turn to you
Have disappeared like my dream will too
With one caress of your silky soft skin
I now realise what I shall soon be missing
Having you here makes the world seem right
Never leave me in the dark with only candle light
Feeling your hands take a hold of me
Helps me establish how things should be
For I know that always we're together
As friends from now until forever [comments] => 4 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 48 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

floating in the dark

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I dream of your lips floating down my neck
I know I shall no longer have you to depend
for the times when i could turn to you
Have disappeared like my dream will too
With one caress of your silky soft skin
I now realise what I shall soon be missing
Having you here makes the world seem right
Never leave me in the dark with only candle light
Feeling your hands take a hold of me
Helps me establish how things should be
For I know that always we're together
As friends from now until forever

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-02-11 05:26:07]
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Re: floating in the dark (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:26:05 AM AEST
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really sweet hun

lukex

Re: floating in the dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful....Kie

Re: floating in the dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:37:27 PM AEST
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Wow! Another beautiful poem! Hey I wasn't mistaken when I said you have great talent! Its very sad when the relationship with someone special ends, I know what it means but at least you'll remain friends and that's a good thing. Keep it up, and keep strong.
Anne :D

Re: floating in the dark (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:34:26 AM AEST
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aweee... sounds to good to be just friends.. wish things could work out .. short again and right to the point ..i like it very much.. sandy

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