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A Mere Whisper

Contributed by evryrose on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 02:12:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



When all is quiet and the lights have grown dim, I roll over To find you sleeping
So peaceful and serene
I drape my arm over your bare chest and your eyes flutter, Your lashes casting shadows on my cheek
I lie there and watch you sleep until no longer can my eyes Stay open
Slowly, slowly they close, fighting sleep until the end
Savoring every moment I can feel safe inside your arms
Warm in your embrace
As I sleep, I sense your eyes open and smile at me softly
Caressing my face with your gaze, so gently whispering in My ear "I love you"
You think I am asleep, that I didnt hear you
But as you hold me close and slowly drift into Unconsciousness, I smile
This is what it is all about
This is where I belong




Copyright © evryrose ... [ 2004-02-11 02:12:05]
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Re: A Mere Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:08:39 AM AEST
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awww i can see you really want this. i hope it happens. your poem is great i hope it gave you hope.


Re: A Mere Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:49:06 AM AEST
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I think you have written a wonderfull poem, touching on that feeling that can only be found between two people that not only love one another, but they are also in love with one another...

Cheers,
#13


Re: A Mere Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:45:06 AM AEST
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That is so sweet. I now I feel all fuzzy inside.



*applauds*



Fancifully done.

“Relive your dreams and cherished past; The sweetest things forever last.”
~The Palatine Poet


Re: A Mere Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by intelectualpoet on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:50:57 PM AEST
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*speachless*

Baby, I think you have just stolen what little bit of my heart you didnt have, you now have my heart in it's entirety, I love you SOOOO much




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