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Capturing The Past
Contributed by
mich
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:18:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How the past wasn't meant to last. For the past has passed. You can't reach back for it because it is in the past. You can't change it because it has passed.But remember the past the memory will last. If the past didn't pass then you could capture the past at last.
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Re: Capturing The Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:26:03 PM AEST (User
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well said in a few words |
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Re: Capturing The Past
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:50:34 AM AEST (User
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i sorry but it seems like you've mixed too many styles into too few lines |
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Re: Capturing The Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:58:17 AM AEST (User
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I thought it was really cute. It was like a tongue twister in a rhyme and it made a clear point about the past. Well done. Kie |
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