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Array ( [sid] => 34516 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Home [time] => 2004-02-10 16:13:46 [hometext] => This is a poem about a very said topic that no one ever wants to discuss, but I wrote it in honor of my friend Heather's little cousin. He was beaten to death by his father, in a fit of rage. [bodytext] => Broken Home
~~~~~~~~~~~~
As the darkness surrounds me
My heart starts to pound.
I back into a cornner
And cower down close to the ground.

As I sat there quietly
I heard footsteps coming down the hall.
I had to make a run for it
So I slowly moved away from the wall.

As I looked around the corner
I didn't see anyone.
So I crept a little down the hall
The began to run.

He came out from behind a door
And started to look around.
He knew that I was running
He heard the echoing sound.

I heard him chsing after me
He was catching up quick.
I suddenly found it hard to breath
The air was getting thick.

As I started down the stairs
I thought I'd lost my mind.
I needed to find somewhere to hide
A place he couldn't find.

I hid under a bed
I heard him come in the room
He was getting closer to me
I knew I was about to meet my doom.

He flipped over the mattress
He saw me hiding there
He slowly started reaching down
I knew my life he wouldn't spare.

I wanted to call 9-1-1
But I couldn't reach the phone.
As I took in my last breath
In this broken home.

My father had strong hands
That hit me all of the time.
Be he couldn't do it anymore
Because he took a precious life,
Mine! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Aaralyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Broken Home

Contributed by Aaralyn on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Broken Home
~~~~~~~~~~~~
As the darkness surrounds me
My heart starts to pound.
I back into a cornner
And cower down close to the ground.

As I sat there quietly
I heard footsteps coming down the hall.
I had to make a run for it
So I slowly moved away from the wall.

As I looked around the corner
I didn't see anyone.
So I crept a little down the hall
The began to run.

He came out from behind a door
And started to look around.
He knew that I was running
He heard the echoing sound.

I heard him chsing after me
He was catching up quick.
I suddenly found it hard to breath
The air was getting thick.

As I started down the stairs
I thought I'd lost my mind.
I needed to find somewhere to hide
A place he couldn't find.

I hid under a bed
I heard him come in the room
He was getting closer to me
I knew I was about to meet my doom.

He flipped over the mattress
He saw me hiding there
He slowly started reaching down
I knew my life he wouldn't spare.

I wanted to call 9-1-1
But I couldn't reach the phone.
As I took in my last breath
In this broken home.

My father had strong hands
That hit me all of the time.
Be he couldn't do it anymore
Because he took a precious life,
Mine!




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Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:57:10 PM AEST
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Well written..but this makes me so mad..... even more than sad.....
Jenni


Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:06:59 PM AEST
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well written, about a very intense and sad subject. Must have been hard to do. Bravo!


Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyValentine on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:51:43 PM AEST
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wow, i've read a few of your poems & they're all amazing. You're really good at this. Your poems are all so emotional & i love things that scare me or make me cry


Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:53:39 PM AEST
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I KNOW THE FEELING VERY VERY WELL. FOR I AM A CHILD OF A BROKEN HOME. a time I never would want to relive again. a time I wouldnt want anyone to feel like what i did. but i read it in your poem. take care. IM YOUR FRIEND. SANDY


Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:49:10 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITE THAT CRAP JUST SUCKS




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