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Miss Night
Miss Darkness
Miss Seduction

You are a creature of destruction
Always followed by dark light

You look so innocent and yet you are so deadly
So beautifull, your eyes look at me sadly

Like in hypnosys I fall inside your eyes
I see a small dimm light in them that shines

And I start following that light
I feel your hands so cold, so soft
Touching lightly on my chin,
You know that I am in your power
You start to grin, as you come closer..

I feel your cold breath on my neck
I realize I can't go back
And then the extasy from tender bite
Is overwhelming me in the excite
I feel my feet leaving the ground
My head is spinning all around
I feel the blood leaving my body
My vision is starting to get blurry
I feel so feek, I feel so good
I feel like now I understood

When barrier of life and death
Resides on soft vampires breath
And as my veins became dry
I realized - I lived to die [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => subnet_spider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Vampiress

Contributed by subnet_spider on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Miss Blood
Miss Night
Miss Darkness
Miss Seduction

You are a creature of destruction
Always followed by dark light

You look so innocent and yet you are so deadly
So beautifull, your eyes look at me sadly

Like in hypnosys I fall inside your eyes
I see a small dimm light in them that shines

And I start following that light
I feel your hands so cold, so soft
Touching lightly on my chin,
You know that I am in your power
You start to grin, as you come closer..

I feel your cold breath on my neck
I realize I can't go back
And then the extasy from tender bite
Is overwhelming me in the excite
I feel my feet leaving the ground
My head is spinning all around
I feel the blood leaving my body
My vision is starting to get blurry
I feel so feek, I feel so good
I feel like now I understood

When barrier of life and death
Resides on soft vampires breath
And as my veins became dry
I realized - I lived to die

Copyright © subnet_spider ... [ 2004-02-10 10:16:11]
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Re: Vampiress (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:26:28 AM AEST
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Awesome! really dark to, very great write.

Arden

Re: Vampiress (User Rating: 1 )
by Deablo on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:10:12 PM AEST
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Very nice writing very discriptive, Very powerful.

Re: Vampiress (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:16:34 PM AEST
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i wish that i had to talent to write like this, no really i'm being honest! i truely do like this so please don't think i'm making fun of you!
good, keep on writing, you have a real talent!

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