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Array ( [sid] => 34481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FeAr>LoVe [time] => 2004-02-10 06:07:34 [hometext] => This is kinda like a freestyle poem, so It doesnt rhyme all the way, cos its not supposed too [bodytext] => Waking from this coma,
I had for seventeen years,
I can feel all the trauma,
Of all my hidden fears,

Surging their way through my veins,
Invading all of my secret thoughts,
This attack by fear is so vain,
Because already I'm consumed by hurt

Futileness wouldnt stop it,
Kept on going inside me,
Fear controls all of this,
My head and the way I see

I cant even leave the house,
Wont move from this bed,
Worlds far to crazy for me,
Everyone only see's in read

I am just a confused boy,
Lifeless lost everything,
Used like a cheap toy,
Thrown away, discarded by
This useless degrading
Society

It runs through my head,
I wish I was dead,
But I have to control,
With this knife that I hold

It buries me further,
It terrifes me,
This burden
Which you can see,
I have to carry,
So I can be free

It invades my thoughts,
Makes me blind to the world,
Consumed by fear,
All it ever does is taunt

Scared of the world today,
Want to die today,
Cant escape from reality,
So I let myself
Be consumed by insanity

Fear>>Love [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
FeAr>LoVe

Contributed by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:07:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Waking from this coma,
I had for seventeen years,
I can feel all the trauma,
Of all my hidden fears,

Surging their way through my veins,
Invading all of my secret thoughts,
This attack by fear is so vain,
Because already I'm consumed by hurt

Futileness wouldnt stop it,
Kept on going inside me,
Fear controls all of this,
My head and the way I see

I cant even leave the house,
Wont move from this bed,
Worlds far to crazy for me,
Everyone only see's in read

I am just a confused boy,
Lifeless lost everything,
Used like a cheap toy,
Thrown away, discarded by
This useless degrading
Society

It runs through my head,
I wish I was dead,
But I have to control,
With this knife that I hold

It buries me further,
It terrifes me,
This burden
Which you can see,
I have to carry,
So I can be free

It invades my thoughts,
Makes me blind to the world,
Consumed by fear,
All it ever does is taunt

Scared of the world today,
Want to die today,
Cant escape from reality,
So I let myself
Be consumed by insanity

Fear>>Love




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Re: FeAr>LoVe (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:27:27 AM AEST
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I can totally relate to this....it feels so much easier to die or go insane than having to live in this so-called world. I feel the confusion, my friend.


Re: FeAr>LoVe (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:26:44 AM AEST
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Fear is greather than love that's so true.. But remember there is no greater feeling than being in love. Good write. You know your freestyle mannerism worked well in your poetry. However, I almost felt like this could be great song lyrics. It had catchy sayings and a repeat of certain words. Kinda Eminem meats Metallica song lyrics. Very impressive I hope you make the best of everything.


Re: FeAr>LoVe (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:50:36 PM AEST
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hi alec

just want you to know im reading your stuff giving you some support and song lyrics is a possibility think about it stay strong

lots a love
michelle




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