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Array ( [sid] => 34357 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mislead Youth [time] => 2004-02-09 05:49:21 [hometext] => Put two and two together and you get three [bodytext] => Diseased mind of the adolesence,
WARNING
May commit suicide
May commit genocide
Never trust a thirteen year old

The mislead youth march down the road,
Ruled by South Park and Marilyn Manson,
Who told them to kill everyone,
Kill every single first born son,
Wearing Black clothes and brown
Trench Coats
A Tech Nine each, bought from
Wal Mart
Headphones in the ears already,
Mind focused on mom's spaggetti

Point and shoot
Kill Kill Kill
Sweet dreams
Kill Kill Kill

Indoctrinated by TV and radio
Whats next?
Influenced by William Shakespeare?
Do away the school,
King Lear Style?
Maybe J.K. Rowling had a hand in it,
Magic is evil, God is the *****

Hanging from the celing,
Counting crows in the CD Player,
Momma's Crying again,
Priest Jones is saying a prayer,
Irony?
Maybe...

Shotgun in the hand, Brother on the left,
Double tap to back of his head,
Executed by republicans,
Justice served well,
To an eight year old boy
Who pulled the trigger

Did the kid find the gun?
Or did the gun find the kid?
Was it the parents fault,
Or was it the Nu-Metal revolt

The question is, where the kids learn,
Where do they learn how to live,
From the respect they earn?
From the music that gives,
Emotions and power
To the unsuspecting kid,
Or was it daddy,
Beating Billy over the head,
With a four by four and a keg,
Was it mummy, taking pills,
Was it the school,
Indoctrinating you,
Was it the bullies,
The rapists and liars,
Was it the fact,
This false world you tire
The fact that parents arnt doing their Job,
The fact the blame is always shifted,
To those with creativness,
When every single person knows,
That whatever children learn,
Right to wrong/ Left to right,
Wrong to right/ Right to left,
They learnt it all from one place,
The parents, the problem
Without a face
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Mislead Youth

Contributed by alecfernadez on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:49:21 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Diseased mind of the adolesence,
WARNING
May commit suicide
May commit genocide
Never trust a thirteen year old

The mislead youth march down the road,
Ruled by South Park and Marilyn Manson,
Who told them to kill everyone,
Kill every single first born son,
Wearing Black clothes and brown
Trench Coats
A Tech Nine each, bought from
Wal Mart
Headphones in the ears already,
Mind focused on mom's spaggetti

Point and shoot
Kill Kill Kill
Sweet dreams
Kill Kill Kill

Indoctrinated by TV and radio
Whats next?
Influenced by William Shakespeare?
Do away the school,
King Lear Style?
Maybe J.K. Rowling had a hand in it,
Magic is evil, God is the *****

Hanging from the celing,
Counting crows in the CD Player,
Momma's Crying again,
Priest Jones is saying a prayer,
Irony?
Maybe...

Shotgun in the hand, Brother on the left,
Double tap to back of his head,
Executed by republicans,
Justice served well,
To an eight year old boy
Who pulled the trigger

Did the kid find the gun?
Or did the gun find the kid?
Was it the parents fault,
Or was it the Nu-Metal revolt

The question is, where the kids learn,
Where do they learn how to live,
From the respect they earn?
From the music that gives,
Emotions and power
To the unsuspecting kid,
Or was it daddy,
Beating Billy over the head,
With a four by four and a keg,
Was it mummy, taking pills,
Was it the school,
Indoctrinating you,
Was it the bullies,
The rapists and liars,
Was it the fact,
This false world you tire
The fact that parents arnt doing their Job,
The fact the blame is always shifted,
To those with creativness,
When every single person knows,
That whatever children learn,
Right to wrong/ Left to right,
Wrong to right/ Right to left,
They learnt it all from one place,
The parents, the problem
Without a face




Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-02-09 05:49:21]
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Re: Mislead Youth (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:08:07 AM AEST
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Give yourself a pat on the back for reflecting the current state of the world so accurately! It's so sad that our world is so ****ed up and that we have to live in it...


Re: Mislead Youth (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:29:16 AM AEST
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Sensational,,,,,

Cheers,
#13


Re: Mislead Youth (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 09:53:11 AM AEST
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sensational read. I seriously enjoyed how you accurately capurted the state of todays youth...you are explicit in detail and cudos to you for that. Keep up the good work!


Re: Mislead Youth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:27:43 AM AEST
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well said.




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