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Array ( [sid] => 3432 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a fool [time] => 2002-09-06 11:57:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit here and think of words
to express the way that I feel.
For months being played for a fool,
thinking what we had was so real.

I sit here and think
of all the lies that you told,
and still can't conceive
how someone can be so damn cold.

Night after night,
I waited by the phone.
Day after day thinking you loved me,
but still I was alone.

Alone and waiting for you,
to come and take me away.
still I sat lonely
and I waited for you day after day.

I wanted so much to beleive,
every word you said was true.
But I was just a fool,
nothing but a game to you.

Just a fool who fell
for every word you said.
Beleiving what we had was real,
when all you did was play with my head.

I fell into that trap,
and that game you play so well.
Now I feel nothing but hatred for you
and you can go to hell...

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 421 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poetess730 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Just a fool

Contributed by poetess730 on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 11:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I sit here and think of words
to express the way that I feel.
For months being played for a fool,
thinking what we had was so real.

I sit here and think
of all the lies that you told,
and still can't conceive
how someone can be so damn cold.

Night after night,
I waited by the phone.
Day after day thinking you loved me,
but still I was alone.

Alone and waiting for you,
to come and take me away.
still I sat lonely
and I waited for you day after day.

I wanted so much to beleive,
every word you said was true.
But I was just a fool,
nothing but a game to you.

Just a fool who fell
for every word you said.
Beleiving what we had was real,
when all you did was play with my head.

I fell into that trap,
and that game you play so well.
Now I feel nothing but hatred for you
and you can go to hell...

Copyright © poetess730 ... [ 2002-09-06 11:57:26]
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Re: Just a fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:07:23 AM AEST
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wow, great write, I feel the hurt, the hopes die and of course the anger.
Fantastic poem full of emotions.

Re: Just a fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:13:16 AM AEST
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I hope you find some one true.

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