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Array ( [sid] => 34273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Scares Me. [time] => 2004-02-08 07:06:27 [hometext] => this is my first poem, point and laugh, do watever you want. does it make any sense to u? [bodytext] => It scares me to know that you could go,
In the darkness of night,
In the blink of an eye,
I shalt not know your friendship.

With out your love I am nothing,
Should you go, I shalt surely follow,
If only to see your shadow.

Should I stay, I shalt not know,
Should I go, I shalt surely follow,
Either way I lose how can i choose? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 16 [informant] => blindcause [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

It Scares Me.

Contributed by blindcause on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

It scares me to know that you could go,
In the darkness of night,
In the blink of an eye,
I shalt not know your friendship.

With out your love I am nothing,
Should you go, I shalt surely follow,
If only to see your shadow.

Should I stay, I shalt not know,
Should I go, I shalt surely follow,
Either way I lose how can i choose?

Copyright © blindcause ... [ 2004-02-08 07:06:27]
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Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:19:26 AM AEST
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it dosent make sence but that is only my opnion, anyways a poem isnt about making sence to everyone its about your feelings and emotions, i like the "shalt" bits in it, it gives it an intreasting twist and makes it seem not to simple. i think you've got a really intreasting talent...

Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:19:44 AM AEST
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this is good! very sad though...

Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:07:47 AM AEST
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I think you did quite well.... Well done....
Its not an easy choice, and never is....

Cheers,
#13

Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:48:49 AM AEST
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PLease, check you private message...

Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:24:12 PM AEST
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Thats never an easy choice and you described it well. By the way, welcome to the site.

Re: It Scares Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:57:48 AM AEST
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Nicely done....
Welcome to YPDC...the best site on the net..
Jenni

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