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Array ( [sid] => 34249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Myself [time] => 2004-02-08 00:42:13 [hometext] => my only poem i have felt is worth putting out anywhere, any comments would be great since i dont know how other s would feel about this [bodytext] => In this field of blood colored grass
I keep walking
for you see....
I am not myself
augmentations
upgrades
things that will make me better
but now
I can't find what i was
my old self
is dead [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Barky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Myself

Contributed by Barky on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:42:13 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

In this field of blood colored grass
I keep walking
for you see....
I am not myself
augmentations
upgrades
things that will make me better
but now
I can't find what i was
my old self
is dead

Copyright © Barky ... [ 2004-02-08 00:42:13]
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Re: Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:52:47 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site. First of all you should never worry about what others think of your poetry, its all about how you feel. Some days even the best posts get little to no comments. Dont let that discourage you. As for your poem, i liked it. In the search for perfection, you lose who you really are. I look forward to seeing more.

Re: Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
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I totally agree with Mercedes... Write for yourself..not for people.... Hope you will post more of your work here..
Welcome to YPDC, the best poetry site on the net..
Jenni

Re: Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:22:42 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc. I enjoyed your honesty and the beautiful way you put this out. Yes I can relate to losing myself because its been gone for a long time.
michelle

Re: Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:28:37 AM AEST
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Sometimes I think my very best work goes unnoticed. There's one on here right now called Warlord..I don't think it's had one comment...and one about my grandpa. Your work is good, so post for YOU. I color my hair...I'm a natural redhead but it started turning gray? Now I don't feel natural any more...it's the same shade and everything...but it's not all mine...I'd love to have a boob job. Mine are 38Ds...but gravity is working so I'd like a little lift...you're poetry got me thinking.....LOL

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