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Array ( [sid] => 34241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letting go [time] => 2004-02-07 23:18:25 [hometext] => i'm slowly letting go of not only u but myself too!!! [bodytext] => just a few lines to tell you how i feel,
a few linesto show i care
but what good wii thes lines do
if you're never there?
These words will just be written
never noticed or read
all my feelings down on paper
all the thoughts that will fill my head
whispered softly to myself
so no one else can hear
only i can see whats written
only i can feel my tears
shutting out the world around me
only i canhear my cries
writing my feelings down on paper
my heat starts to die
i'm dying inside
but no one seems to care
i'm trying to hold on
but i'm slowly letting go [comments] => 4 [counter] => 441 [topic] => 48 [informant] => booboo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Letting go

Contributed by booboo on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:18:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

just a few lines to tell you how i feel,
a few linesto show i care
but what good wii thes lines do
if you're never there?
These words will just be written
never noticed or read
all my feelings down on paper
all the thoughts that will fill my head
whispered softly to myself
so no one else can hear
only i can see whats written
only i can feel my tears
shutting out the world around me
only i canhear my cries
writing my feelings down on paper
my heat starts to die
i'm dying inside
but no one seems to care
i'm trying to hold on
but i'm slowly letting go

Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-02-07 23:18:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Letting go (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:57:57 AM AEST
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Your words were noticed and read. Such a sad write, you express yourself well.

Re: Letting go (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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Sad but so lovely...
Jenni

Re: Letting go (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:29:29 AM AEST
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this was noticed and Im sorry for your pain a lovely poem but so sad.
Michelle

Re: Letting go (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:44:28 PM AEST
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So sad! This poem transfers very deep emotion, wonderfully written. Don't give up you are a great poet!
Anne :D

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