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Slow Death on Wet Timber Stairs
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:11:44 PM in AEST
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up up up we go. left foot then right. muffled clumping up the dampened timbers, dank godsent mist filtering through the slats in rivers of white ooze. tentative fingers reaching out to brush the handhold. reluctancy. it looks dangerous. but so am i. so i grasp it firmly as it gives way, commit myself to the plunge through the sharp crisp cool air. it was the right way for me to go. everybody has their time. none of us get out of this alive.
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Re: Slow Death on Wet Timber Stairs
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:24:33 PM AEST (User
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Interesting.... |
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Re: Slow Death on Wet Timber Stairs
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:58:47 PM AEST (User
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What an original poem. Hmmm still can't decide whats the meaning of it, if it's a metaphor or a story like poem, (don't take it badly its me that's the dumb one:p) but i liked it! ;)
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Re: Slow Death on Wet Timber Stairs
(User Rating: 1 ) by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:34:44 PM AEST (User
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i love this. |
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