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Array ( [sid] => 34148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => until i met you [time] => 2004-02-07 02:29:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => (i watched you fall
i watched you scream
i watched as if it were a dream
over and over
feels like forever
never wanted to die
until i met you)

the razor broke
my virgin skin
the blood squeezed out
of the narrow wound
releasing every demon
that i had held within
never thought of doing this
until i met you

i thought of you
throughout the day
so new this feeling
so new this smile
every pain faded
as i breathed you in
never wanted to love
until i met you

so many years wasted
just waiting for you
everyday just virgin foreplay
before your breathing ecstasy
someone i could trust
someone i could love
always felt alone
until i met you

our love grew fast
our love grew mad
most intense emotions
i'd ever had
a slave to feelings
that i'd denied for so long
wouldn't give my life for anyone
until i met you

so quick we grew
so quick we fell
back out of love
and into hell
you left my heart
a poisoned well
never hurt this much
until i met you

alone again
the taste of stale love
still in my mouth
cutting just to feel
the Nothing that i have
came this far for Nothing
never cried like this
until i met you

(call you to our cliff
one last time
for tears and blood and goodbyes

you looked so beautiful
you seemed apart
from everything around you

and now you would move on
forgetting me
in favor of another love

i had to push you
i had to
you were meant for me
no one else)

i watched you fall
i watched you scream
i watched as if it were a dream
over and over
feels like forever
never wanted to die
until i met you [comments] => 7 [counter] => 359 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
until i met you

Contributed by Cancer on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:29:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



(i watched you fall
i watched you scream
i watched as if it were a dream
over and over
feels like forever
never wanted to die
until i met you)

the razor broke
my virgin skin
the blood squeezed out
of the narrow wound
releasing every demon
that i had held within
never thought of doing this
until i met you

i thought of you
throughout the day
so new this feeling
so new this smile
every pain faded
as i breathed you in
never wanted to love
until i met you

so many years wasted
just waiting for you
everyday just virgin foreplay
before your breathing ecstasy
someone i could trust
someone i could love
always felt alone
until i met you

our love grew fast
our love grew mad
most intense emotions
i'd ever had
a slave to feelings
that i'd denied for so long
wouldn't give my life for anyone
until i met you

so quick we grew
so quick we fell
back out of love
and into hell
you left my heart
a poisoned well
never hurt this much
until i met you

alone again
the taste of stale love
still in my mouth
cutting just to feel
the Nothing that i have
came this far for Nothing
never cried like this
until i met you

(call you to our cliff
one last time
for tears and blood and goodbyes

you looked so beautiful
you seemed apart
from everything around you

and now you would move on
forgetting me
in favor of another love

i had to push you
i had to
you were meant for me
no one else)

i watched you fall
i watched you scream
i watched as if it were a dream
over and over
feels like forever
never wanted to die
until i met you




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-02-07 02:29:55]
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Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by Steb3544 on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:42:52 AM AEST
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beautiful, all poems should be filled with such emotions as this..
keep up the good work
steb3544


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:59:56 AM AEST
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marvelous..emotional and rhythmic..very beautiful. venkat


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:08:05 AM AEST
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Dark and disturbing ... but delicious ... great write ... Jan


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:12:41 AM AEST
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this was definitely spell-binding. I've felt the same demented 'love' as you this was awesome. I liked the releasing every demon within part that was friggin sweet.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:36:58 AM AEST
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Wow!


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 10:46:54 AM AEST
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Rather dark but all together amazing.


Re: until i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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wow...f*cking excellent...




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