Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 17:54:04 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 34101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In The Snow [time] => 2004-02-06 18:29:41 [hometext] => I thought I'd give you guys a going away present for my departure from here-, sorry for the messup on the first poem [bodytext] => A serene kingdom of heavenly snow
It seems so incredibly long ago
That evergreens and mountain trails
Whispered to me “Love always prevails”
It lies so deep within me that nothing can make it go away
My love for you will forever stay
I want to have that year back or at least the times in the snow
For then my heart did for you brightly glow
I stand at my life’s crossroad
An owl foretells my choice
I will choose to lay on my heart a heavy load
I do not know whether to mourn or rejoice
I choose the road that leads to you
I do not know what will become of me
The moment my heart fell for you, out of me my common sense flew
My heart holds on to a misty memory
This is the life I choose to lead
My heart and mind have finally agreed
I do not care whose path crosses mine
I will love only you to the end of time
For sometimes one can only love once
You captured my heart with a glowing brilliance
For you shine so bright
Your eyes shine like the stars in twilight
This is the path I have chosen
Though my heart is broken
I chose only you
And those memories in the snow that were few
I choose to let my heart forever shed a tear
For you, for the snow and for last year
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 357 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MissLee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
In The Snow

Contributed by MissLee on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 06:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A serene kingdom of heavenly snow
It seems so incredibly long ago
That evergreens and mountain trails
Whispered to me “Love always prevails”
It lies so deep within me that nothing can make it go away
My love for you will forever stay
I want to have that year back or at least the times in the snow
For then my heart did for you brightly glow
I stand at my life’s crossroad
An owl foretells my choice
I will choose to lay on my heart a heavy load
I do not know whether to mourn or rejoice
I choose the road that leads to you
I do not know what will become of me
The moment my heart fell for you, out of me my common sense flew
My heart holds on to a misty memory
This is the life I choose to lead
My heart and mind have finally agreed
I do not care whose path crosses mine
I will love only you to the end of time
For sometimes one can only love once
You captured my heart with a glowing brilliance
For you shine so bright
Your eyes shine like the stars in twilight
This is the path I have chosen
Though my heart is broken
I chose only you
And those memories in the snow that were few
I choose to let my heart forever shed a tear
For you, for the snow and for last year




Copyright © MissLee ... [ 2004-02-06 18:29:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 11:21:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
good to see your name again..unless this is just one I've missed. I love your poetry..it seems victorian..


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by emvyar on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:30:27 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The images are grand.
It is a wonderful tribute...
The meter needs a little polish
to prevent a few forced lines...
..em..


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:35:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Absolutely impressive.


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:27:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
beautiful
michelle


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:13:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a wonderful poem! The symbolism is beautiful. This one really got to me. Please stay with us!
Blessings to you.
Andrew


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by ilovelillbj on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 10:28:14 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
you obviously have talent although the rhythm isn't all that consistant. a revised version of this would be amazing..
x Sarah x


Re: In The Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Tory on Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 03:28:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is very pretty, it takes me back to my first true love.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com