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Array ( [sid] => 34094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emotionally or Mentally Mucked? what am i? [time] => 2004-02-06 16:41:02 [hometext] => Give me some credit... i'm falling still, tell me some thing about tripple X, PLEASE!! [bodytext] => trying my best,
but i'm only 14,
don't exspect the world of me,
my lack of self-confidence,
self-esteem,
it grows in me,
some days i find it hard to see,
i don't wanna try,
give me some credit,
my brother has asperges,
i've tripple X,
that means i get this way it's coz of that,
i am being good most days,
mum says to always behave,
she don't seem to under-stand,
how hard things are,
sure if i've got a problem,
she's "all ears",
but "my condition",
is that why i don't wanna talk,
when i feel the tears?
i really don't know,
don't even who if i wanna know,
but i gotta focus on letting go,
can't do it at the moment,
my mind says no,
i ain't like them,
i don't wanna break bones,
close to it though,
as i'm hurting soo...

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Emotionally or Mentally Mucked? what am i?

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 04:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

trying my best,
but i'm only 14,
don't exspect the world of me,
my lack of self-confidence,
self-esteem,
it grows in me,
some days i find it hard to see,
i don't wanna try,
give me some credit,
my brother has asperges,
i've tripple X,
that means i get this way it's coz of that,
i am being good most days,
mum says to always behave,
she don't seem to under-stand,
how hard things are,
sure if i've got a problem,
she's "all ears",
but "my condition",
is that why i don't wanna talk,
when i feel the tears?
i really don't know,
don't even who if i wanna know,
but i gotta focus on letting go,
can't do it at the moment,
my mind says no,
i ain't like them,
i don't wanna break bones,
close to it though,
as i'm hurting soo...

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-02-06 16:41:02]
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Re: Emotionally or Mentally Mucked? what am i? (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 05:02:44 PM AEST
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so sorry you suffer this way
very good poem however

michelle

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