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[sid] => 3406
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[aid] => mick
[title] => READ ME! (love poem)
[time] => 2002-09-05 13:14:03
[hometext] => poetry hasnt gotten me anything but more regret
[bodytext] => Its amazing what a person wont see
if they dont look and just let it be
Ive shown you what you are to me
but you've only pay'd attention to a small degree
I could save you
from all your fears
rescue you from broken dreams
and hours of tears
I could keep a frown from your beautiful face
and be your warm embrace
I know that one day you'll see
I know it........
That day i await
but that day, might be 1 day........ too late
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 2236
[topic] => 22
[informant] => wil_ca
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[score] => 79
[ratings] => 21
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
)
READ ME! (love poem)
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 01:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its amazing what a person wont see
if they dont look and just let it be
Ive shown you what you are to me
but you've only pay'd attention to a small degree
I could save you
from all your fears
rescue you from broken dreams
and hours of tears
I could keep a frown from your beautiful face
and be your warm embrace
I know that one day you'll see
I know it........
That day i await
but that day, might be 1 day........ too late
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2002-09-05 13:14:03]
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 04:09:27 PM AEST
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| I like that... a lot, especially the one day too late part. |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 08:59:26 AM AEST
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| Truely enjoyed this one... |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by InexactExactness on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 10:34:57 AM AEST
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| Nice rhyme scheme. |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Twinky on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 10:14:05 PM AEST
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| this was a great poem, i could read it over and over...... i think i am gonna send this to a friend...... she is kinda going through a situation like this! thanx for sharing, later! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by rbps861 on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 12:17:52 PM AEST
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| great poem,good job !! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Haligh on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:46:26 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. the 1 day too late part is a really good final line. |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:52:28 PM AEST
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| BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRING!! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Olddarkme on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:16:39 PM AEST
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| I thought it was ok. I wasn't too impressed with the first few stanzas but I really liked the last one. The attention getting name is kind of funny. |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:21:35 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem to me it resembles a broken relationship that you might of experienced words you wrote are so true and straight from the heart |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:21:45 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem to me it resembles a broken relationship that you might of experienced words you wrote are so true and straight from the heart |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by Desi on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 07:16:14 PM AEST
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| Its short, but long if you read between the lines. Someone you love has hurt you, and you still feel the pain. wounds take time to heal. But in the end, the pain will disappear. |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:59:02 PM AEST
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| This goes with me! I am fully in love with this poem! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:50:41 AM AEST
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| WOW! I really lie this poem alot. i think it goes well together and has a lot of meaning! it made me think about things good job and keep writing! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by stephierose on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 10:32:07 PM AEST
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NO WAY but this poem is exactly how I felt for my first love, and he did come to me except he was too late! It broke my heart to tell him I couldn't be with him! I can totally feel what you've got going!
Stephanie |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by noodle on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:52:01 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this poem and it is so true. good job! |
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Re: READ ME! (love poem)
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by voyage on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 11:42:25 AM AEST
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| This is really good and I feel it through because I can relate. |
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