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[aid] => mick
[title] => Daddy just died
[time] => 2004-02-05 19:40:42
[hometext] => my dad just died!!.. RIP , I hope you're with mom now
[bodytext] => I wrote the poem TIME January 16, 2003 because my mom died and I was the only one there with her.. My dad just died on February 4, 2004 and I don't know what to do.. I can't belive I'll be 16 in May and with no parents at all.. God please help...
Daddy I want you to be here
I need to hug you and kiss away all your fears
I can’t believe I went to school yesterday
With a dad, and came home with no parents at all
I don’t want this to be real
Please wake me up from this never-ending nightmare
I can feel you all around me,
But this silence is killing me
You meant everything to me
And I wanted things to always be the same
Tell me this isn’t real
How am I supposed to deal with this?
I can’t even comprehend with it all
This is too much
I want you to be here
I can’t stop crying so d a m n much
Dad, please wake up
I know you’re still alive
Please hold me once more
And stop my river of cries
I keep asking god why!!
Why would he take my mom away?
And then a year later, you also
Why does god keep challenging me?
Why?
That wasn’t you they showed me,
That couldn’t of been real.
You were so discolored and so foreign
I can’t stop crying
And I know you’d want me to be strong
But how can I do that,
If I don’t know what else tomorrow will reveal?
I know I was destined to get dealt a s h i t t y hand,
But did they really have to take you away?
I feel so bad,
I should of stayed home
I should of called 911
I should of done so much
I should of always been there for you
Thank you for always loving me so much,
I will try to be the daughter you always wanted me to be
I love you
Please come back to me
[comments] => 22
[counter] => 826
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Fairy
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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Daddy just died
Contributed by
Fairy
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:40:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wrote the poem TIME January 16, 2003 because my mom died and I was the only one there with her.. My dad just died on February 4, 2004 and I don't know what to do.. I can't belive I'll be 16 in May and with no parents at all.. God please help...
Daddy I want you to be here
I need to hug you and kiss away all your fears
I can’t believe I went to school yesterday
With a dad, and came home with no parents at all
I don’t want this to be real
Please wake me up from this never-ending nightmare
I can feel you all around me,
But this silence is killing me
You meant everything to me
And I wanted things to always be the same
Tell me this isn’t real
How am I supposed to deal with this?
I can’t even comprehend with it all
This is too much
I want you to be here
I can’t stop crying so d a m n much
Dad, please wake up
I know you’re still alive
Please hold me once more
And stop my river of cries
I keep asking god why!!
Why would he take my mom away?
And then a year later, you also
Why does god keep challenging me?
Why?
That wasn’t you they showed me,
That couldn’t of been real.
You were so discolored and so foreign
I can’t stop crying
And I know you’d want me to be strong
But how can I do that,
If I don’t know what else tomorrow will reveal?
I know I was destined to get dealt a s h i t t y hand,
But did they really have to take you away?
I feel so bad,
I should of stayed home
I should of called 911
I should of done so much
I should of always been there for you
Thank you for always loving me so much,
I will try to be the daughter you always wanted me to be
I love you
Please come back to me
Copyright ©
Fairy
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2004-02-05 19:40:42]
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Re: Daddy just died
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by Elf on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:03:57 PM AEST
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omg! I'm so srry! May God give you peace at mind to heal. My condolences to you. You can always talk to me if you need to.
Hugs,
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:24:02 PM AEST
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| ohhhhh honey im sooo sorry!! omg, there is no way to express how my heart goes out to you, ..is there anything i can do? hang in there, we are behind you here and support you in this sad time, again im so so sorry sweetie, big hugs and big love, nessa x |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:37:25 PM AEST
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*sniffs* Oh, I've already lost one parent, but I can't imagine loosing both! My heart is going out to you, I'm sooo sorry to hear this... if you need to talk to someone PM me... *hugs*
Blessed Be,
Mars |
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:37:35 PM AEST
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| beautiful, i wish i could take away your pain. |
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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Whatever you do, DON'T blame it on yourself. There was no way you could have known that would happen.
I wish you the best. Be strong. Take hope. better day will come.
I know lots of people say it (And most of them mean it too), I will too. I'm truly sorry.
Take care, ok?
David
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:40:45 PM AEST
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awww im sooo sorry for you loss i cant imagine how you must be feeling, know that we all here for you if you ever want to talk, always. dont hesitate, this was a beautiful poem and if their reading it their smiling at it :)
All the best hun
Luke xx |
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by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:41:41 PM AEST
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| No words I can say could ease your pain. My thoughts are with you and my heartfelt condolescences on the loss of your parents. Your poem brought tears to my eyes and I am at a loss for the words I am trying to say. Your loss I cannot imagine. Kie |
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by Pyrochick on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:18:51 PM AEST
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| thats so sad i'm so sry |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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Aww...I'm so sorry for your loss.
~blueheart |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:28:57 PM AEST
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OMG!! fighting back the tears....I'm so sorry... I know David is correct. It's not your fault... Stay strong.... pm me if you need an ear....
Hugs
Jenni |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:32:00 PM AEST
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| Our hearts break for you.....deepest sympathy. |
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:02:13 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry. This world is so terribly messed up, that things like this can happen. Please don't despair, there is hope to be found.
We're praying for you
Andrew |
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:09:16 AM AEST
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oh dear... please e-mail me!! I just lost my father, too.
emilyb1208@hotmail.com
AOL IM: emilyb1208
God bless... |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:56:08 AM AEST
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| I feel so bad for you I cant imagine! I lost my mom so I know the pain of loosing a parent its so tough! I hope you will get the srength! Christina |
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:19:45 AM AEST
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Im so very sorry for your loss try not to blame yourself.We all do it at times and the shoulds and ifs start popping in. Im here for you anytime you need to talk. Pm me or shoot me and email
sweet_tweety33@yahoo.com or desertpoet35@hotmail.com
Hugs and love to you dear heart
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 07:20:25 AM AEST
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I feel like I have no right to even comment on this, as I have no idea how you're feeling. I've never had anyone I was close to die. I simply don't know what to say to you... not that it would really help even if I did. I had a good friend awhile back who lost both her parents within a few years in 2 separate car crashes, but she never really talked about it... I really don't know what to say to console you in any way, except that I have no doubt they're both somewhere beautiful, happy to be reunited and watching you and loving you. If you're interested, I wrote a poem for that friend of mine called Angels, it's on the site... feel free to read it if you want. If not, that's fine too. Anyways I'm gonna shut up now, I've rambled on for far too long. I'm very sorry for your loss. I know everyone says it but like I said I'm lost as to what else to say. I hope you find the strength to get though it.
Blessed Be
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:15:19 AM AEST
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| My condolences to you, you're in my prayers and I hope you find the strength to get through this tough time. |
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by Fairy on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:20:45 AM AEST
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I wanted to thank everyone for leaving comments and telling me how they feel.. It was a nice to wake up this morning and read what everyone has left.. I understand that no one knows what to say or how to feel, eveyone I've talked to says the same, and it's okay I guess because I don't know what to say about the situation or even how to cope or feel about it, it's just way too unreal. because I will be sixteen in May, my sister Karen just turned 18 and my brother Brian will be 21 in July and all of us are just trying to believe what's happened.. I literally can't believe that he's not here anymore. And that my mom isn't either. All my family members are in Georgia so the closest comfort is the few friends I've made since I moved here to Kansas. I mean, I'm sitting in his room on the computer and waiting for him to come in and say, "How is my Jessa-boo doing?".. :( I wish God didn't keep challenging me all the time.. I've always had to learn things the hard way and have something drastic happen.. I was finally able to forgive my mom because after she died I was so angry at her because of past things she put me through.. And everytime we get settled, something gets launched our way.. I know things happen for a reason, I just wish it didn't invole taking my dad away. I'm sorry I just keep going on, but everything is so intense.. Thank you all for the comments, they don't go unnoticed.
~~Jessica~~
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:35:48 PM AEST
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this was so sad and touched me deeply. I'm not gonna say I'm sorry or tell you to 'get over it' or 'I can relate' because that is BS and i can't relate. I hope u can rely on yer siblings as well as friends that u can talk to. I hope u get through this difficult time I can't even imagine the pain u must be going through. PM me if u want or add me at bobothepimpclown@hotmail.com. I'll always be there to talk...
Bobo (Joel) |
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by Chicken on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:37:50 AM AEST
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| Oh god hun...I am so sorry...if you ever need a shoulder to cry on just shoot me an email....my condolences to you hun..I know what it feels like to be alone.... |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 10:20:38 AM AEST
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| aww... hun its ok i lost my dad last year at about the same time! i know what u r going through! i just lost a best friends from suicied just last week! i'm still havinf a ruf time! i'm here 2 talk 2 if u wanna talk e-mail me at princess_bear_1@hotmail.com!! |
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by Letting_Go on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:44:10 AM AEST
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| Oh dear Fariy, this was certainly not good to hear about. My heart is aching for your loss. There really isn't any words to say when someone dies - expectantly or unexpectantly. I hope things can settle down in your life right now so you can come to terms with everything that you need to. I know everyone else has said it, but I am here too. You know how to reach me. I will not overlook an email or message from you. Take care and take things slowly, one thing at a time. |
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