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Array ( [sid] => 34003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm sorry part 2 [time] => 2004-02-05 19:37:26 [hometext] => To the person whose heart that I broke [bodytext] => I'm sorry that I couldn't
tell you the truth about
why I didn't want to live anymore.

I'm sorry that I broke your
heart the way that I did
I never meant for it
to turn out like this

I never wanted to fall in
love with you and want you
to fell like you couldn't
trust me because of all the
things that I did in the past

I'm sorry that I couldn't
look you in the eyes and tell
you that I loved you with all my
heart and that I couldn't stand to
be around you anymore.

I'm sorry if I made you not
want to look me in the eyes
and tell me what you really
had on your mind.

I'm sorry if I broke your
heart but I couldn't go on
another day knowing that
you never wanted to be around
me again.

I'm really really really sorry that
I broke you in two the way that I did
I never meant to break your heart.

I never wanted you to not
want to be my friend anymore
because of what I did.

I know that it was very stupid to
go out and get drunk and then not
tell you the truth. I never wanted to
do it but I just did.

And I know that you may never
forgive me for everything that I did
but I wish that you could maybe
find away in your heart to forgive
everything that I have done to you.

I miss your friendship and I hope maybe
if you ever get this that I will never
forget you at all.

So this is the last time that I will say
it I'm sorry.

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I'm sorry part 2

Contributed by lildrama04 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I'm sorry that I couldn't
tell you the truth about
why I didn't want to live anymore.

I'm sorry that I broke your
heart the way that I did
I never meant for it
to turn out like this

I never wanted to fall in
love with you and want you
to fell like you couldn't
trust me because of all the
things that I did in the past

I'm sorry that I couldn't
look you in the eyes and tell
you that I loved you with all my
heart and that I couldn't stand to
be around you anymore.

I'm sorry if I made you not
want to look me in the eyes
and tell me what you really
had on your mind.

I'm sorry if I broke your
heart but I couldn't go on
another day knowing that
you never wanted to be around
me again.

I'm really really really sorry that
I broke you in two the way that I did
I never meant to break your heart.

I never wanted you to not
want to be my friend anymore
because of what I did.

I know that it was very stupid to
go out and get drunk and then not
tell you the truth. I never wanted to
do it but I just did.

And I know that you may never
forgive me for everything that I did
but I wish that you could maybe
find away in your heart to forgive
everything that I have done to you.

I miss your friendship and I hope maybe
if you ever get this that I will never
forget you at all.

So this is the last time that I will say
it I'm sorry.

Copyright © lildrama04 ... [ 2004-02-05 19:37:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm sorry part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:49:04 PM AEST
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redudancy has a power all it's own, hope the receipient of this apology takes it! good write!
~Remy~

Re: I'm sorry part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:25:04 AM AEST
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One word - editing... I give this a 2.8 on the Nortiscale because it is a good start with a lot of feeling.
norticus

Re: I'm sorry part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by NirvanaLotus on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:44:29 AM AEST
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wonderful apology. its beutiful and it really shows your feelings

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