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Array ( [sid] => 33984 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Empty Page [time] => 2004-02-05 16:48:20 [hometext] => Dedicated to all these pages of which I've drowned in my sorrow [bodytext] => This new page,
It was pure,
Once,
And now I've messed it up,
Again,
Dirtied,
Soiled another page,
Again,
This once empty page,
And lifeless page,
Now screaming out at you,
Never to be heard,
Never to be seen,
Only tucked away,
This once pure page,
Dirtied by my sickened mind,
Tormented inside me head,
To only be cast aside,
By my own hand,
This once new page,
Is filling full of empty spaced,
Filled out on,
By a nullness,
Emptied out upon,
By a sickened health,
This once empty page,
Now ruined,
By my lack of thoughts for others,
My lack of love for others,
Lack of love,
Lacking love,
This once nulled space,
Now overcome by me,
And all of my thoughts,
So called impurities,
Of the head,
Of my head,
Screamed out upon,
By my,
Once filled head,
This once unstained page,
Now wrecked by a flood,
From my heart,
Tears of neverlastingness,
Every minute,
Gone in a second,
Or is this one two?
A life story,
Read out loud,
This page once innocent,
Now poisened,
By my dreams,
Lost by a touch,
A letter,
One word,
And the innocence is lost,
Of this once,
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This Empty Page

Contributed by Asatru on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 04:48:20 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

This new page,
It was pure,
Once,
And now I've messed it up,
Again,
Dirtied,
Soiled another page,
Again,
This once empty page,
And lifeless page,
Now screaming out at you,
Never to be heard,
Never to be seen,
Only tucked away,
This once pure page,
Dirtied by my sickened mind,
Tormented inside me head,
To only be cast aside,
By my own hand,
This once new page,
Is filling full of empty spaced,
Filled out on,
By a nullness,
Emptied out upon,
By a sickened health,
This once empty page,
Now ruined,
By my lack of thoughts for others,
My lack of love for others,
Lack of love,
Lacking love,
This once nulled space,
Now overcome by me,
And all of my thoughts,
So called impurities,
Of the head,
Of my head,
Screamed out upon,
By my,
Once filled head,
This once unstained page,
Now wrecked by a flood,
From my heart,
Tears of neverlastingness,
Every minute,
Gone in a second,
Or is this one two?
A life story,
Read out loud,
This page once innocent,
Now poisened,
By my dreams,
Lost by a touch,
A letter,
One word,
And the innocence is lost,
Of this once,
Empty page.

Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2004-02-05 16:48:20]
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Re: This Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:44:53 PM AEST
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Your poem just screamed out at me and grabbed hold! I have had similiar thoughts but could have never worded it the way you have. Pain and rawness and it was deeply touching.

Re: This Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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Thanks kie, that's what I was trying to do.

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