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[sid] => 33970
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => I'm sorry
[time] => 2004-02-05 14:55:12
[hometext] => For the person who's heart I broke
[bodytext] => I'm sorry for everything
that I have done to you
I'm sorry for all the tears
that you had to shed because
of what I did to you that night.
I'm sorry for breaking your
heart and treating you like trash.
I'm so sorry for everything
and now you won't even look
at me whenever I try to tell you that
I'm sorry.
I'm really really really sorry for all the
pain that I may have caused you in the
past but I have tried and tried to tell you
that I'm sorry and you won't even listen to me.
Why did I have to tell you that
I wanted to end my life
Why did I have to break your heart.
Why was I being so stupid that night
that I went out and got drunk and
told you that I didn't want to be with you anymore.
I'm really really really sorry
for everything that I have done.
I just hope that one day you
will some day forgive me for
everything that I have done to you.
I really miss our friendship
and I hope that we can become
friends again
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 7294
[topic] => 50
[informant] => lildrama04
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 42
[ratings] => 12
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => ApologyPoetry
)
I'm sorry
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I'm sorry for everything
that I have done to you
I'm sorry for all the tears
that you had to shed because
of what I did to you that night.
I'm sorry for breaking your
heart and treating you like trash.
I'm so sorry for everything
and now you won't even look
at me whenever I try to tell you that
I'm sorry.
I'm really really really sorry for all the
pain that I may have caused you in the
past but I have tried and tried to tell you
that I'm sorry and you won't even listen to me.
Why did I have to tell you that
I wanted to end my life
Why did I have to break your heart.
Why was I being so stupid that night
that I went out and got drunk and
told you that I didn't want to be with you anymore.
I'm really really really sorry
for everything that I have done.
I just hope that one day you
will some day forgive me for
everything that I have done to you.
I really miss our friendship
and I hope that we can become
friends again
Copyright ©
lildrama04
... [
2004-02-05 14:55:12]
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:37:25 PM AEST
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| This poem pulled at my heart strings and touched me to my core. I thought it was so touching that you wrote a poem to simply say you were sorry. If every person that broke a heart wrote something like this the pain would be so much less, I think. Great job on this one. Kie |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Aika on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:55:25 AM AEST
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woow, excellent....
sometimes we do mistakes.. hope you are forgiven and happy again.. love, aika:-) |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by norticus on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:54:51 PM AEST
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Your name is perfect for the poem. I'm grading this low on my Nortiscale today for the use of the term really really really sorry. I'm really really really sorry if that bugs ya'
1 on the Nortiscale
norticus |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by weezer21 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:07:10 PM AEST
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this reminds me of my ex-boyfriend....maybe you should just keep trying harder to let her know who you are and that you do truly care...hope it all works out
-x jessi x- |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:09:46 PM AEST
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This is touched me, touched my heart. This is a wonderful apology. I hope you gave this person this poem, maybe they forgave you.
Spazzo |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:31:13 PM AEST
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If i'm not mistaken, this is among the most read poems on YPDC. I just thought i'd say I hope you're friends now, and that I can someday garner this amount of attention for my poetry here.
N_F
*more than one in a thousand* |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:06:52 AM AEST
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wow this reminds me of how i feel now...i just broke my exboyfriends heart for like the 3rd time...and i feel terrible...he tells me hes fine with everything but i know hes not cuz he called my friend crying...and now he doesnt want to talk or see me again becuz he thinks it would be harder for me to get over him if i did......its a long story....but i feel soo bad...
but very good poem keep up the great writing!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:01:55 AM AEST
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| i know this feeling...its wat happened with my ex...this is an awesome write |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by jheng on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:53:02 AM AEST
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nice poem. hope everything's ok now with you ... |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:32:27 AM AEST
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| nice poem i hope everything is okay with you n your friend now. |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 02:18:25 PM AEST
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| it looks as though this is one for the books. thank you for sharing. i so relate and i know others do too. |
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