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Array ( [sid] => 33909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Souless Feelings [time] => 2004-02-05 00:35:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why do i see a frown on your face
Why aren't you happy in this place

Why do tears tread down from your eyes
Why do i hear the anger in your dreadful sighs

Why are you seething with contempt
After all this wasn't your first attempt

Why do you feel as if you have a burden on your shoulders
Your body stiff as if lying under a ten pound boulder

Why has a dark gray cloud settled in your heart
Why can't you try life with a fresh new start

Why aren't you contented with your soul
Its as if in your chest theres a big black hole

How can i help you
When you tell me there's nothing i can do

You look at me as if i'm not there
You just lay on your bed and at the wall you stare

I need you here with me
Is there anything that can make you feel free

Why are you filled with so much tension
When asking for help you cannot mention

Its as if your alreadly dead
The wound in your heart has already bled

You look like you've lost all feeling
As if you were a ghost floating around the ceiling

I need you with me in this life please believe
Because i couldn't stand it if you decided to leave


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Souless Feelings

Contributed by NikkiMNelson on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:35:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why do i see a frown on your face
Why aren't you happy in this place

Why do tears tread down from your eyes
Why do i hear the anger in your dreadful sighs

Why are you seething with contempt
After all this wasn't your first attempt

Why do you feel as if you have a burden on your shoulders
Your body stiff as if lying under a ten pound boulder

Why has a dark gray cloud settled in your heart
Why can't you try life with a fresh new start

Why aren't you contented with your soul
Its as if in your chest theres a big black hole

How can i help you
When you tell me there's nothing i can do

You look at me as if i'm not there
You just lay on your bed and at the wall you stare

I need you here with me
Is there anything that can make you feel free

Why are you filled with so much tension
When asking for help you cannot mention

Its as if your alreadly dead
The wound in your heart has already bled

You look like you've lost all feeling
As if you were a ghost floating around the ceiling

I need you with me in this life please believe
Because i couldn't stand it if you decided to leave






Copyright © NikkiMNelson ... [ 2004-02-05 00:35:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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