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And I can’t sleep
My conscience is hounding
I feel the guilt heap

Regardless of fault
What I hear is consistent
The noise doesn’t halt
It’s ever so persistent

You screwed up again!
Why did you even try?
Your goodness is pretend!
More or less, it’s a lie!

Your heart is black!
Hell’s where you belong!
All decency you lack!
Your list of sin is long!

No one wants you!
Not the you that’s real!
When your truth’s in view,
Your worthlessness it does reveal

My head’s screaming at me
I can’t make it stop
It’s so easy to believe
I feel my heart drop

I’m so tired of trying
And failing miserably!
I’m tired of fighting
And never being set free!

The noise is so loud
Who’s voice can it be?
No peace is allowed
Because the voice is me!
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The Noise

Contributed by drgnreborn on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My head’s pounding
And I can’t sleep
My conscience is hounding
I feel the guilt heap

Regardless of fault
What I hear is consistent
The noise doesn’t halt
It’s ever so persistent

You screwed up again!
Why did you even try?
Your goodness is pretend!
More or less, it’s a lie!

Your heart is black!
Hell’s where you belong!
All decency you lack!
Your list of sin is long!

No one wants you!
Not the you that’s real!
When your truth’s in view,
Your worthlessness it does reveal

My head’s screaming at me
I can’t make it stop
It’s so easy to believe
I feel my heart drop

I’m so tired of trying
And failing miserably!
I’m tired of fighting
And never being set free!

The noise is so loud
Who’s voice can it be?
No peace is allowed
Because the voice is me!

Copyright Â© drgnreborn ... [ 2004-02-04 22:42:58]
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Re: The Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:01:09 PM AEST
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Ahh, another fact of the low self esteem. I am with you. I write about being Ugly in my poems. I consider myself Nothing But A Girl...Stand up and be counted amongst us girly....
Good poem!

Jazz

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