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Array ( [sid] => 33880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wonderful Memories [time] => 2004-02-04 21:11:03 [hometext] => to all who have lost a dad. [bodytext] => You picked me up when I was down,
I thought you were my shining knight.
I came to you with all my troubles
And you were there to comfort my darkest fears.
You never said a thing to hurt me,
Or make me insecure.
You loved me unconditionally
And to you I am forever in your debt.
You were there to kill that big black spider
Climbing on my wall.
And you always knew how to fix
whatever it was I broke.
Now I have grown older,
And you are not there as much.
I know that you still love me,
But what are you to do?
With every day that I pass
I still think of you.
And how you always knew
Why flowers never bloomed.
Or how the little people
Got inside the big black screen.
I sit here and think back
On all these wonderful memories
And as I lay those never blooming flowers down
Upon your grey cement bed
I think of all the memories we’ll have
Once we meet again.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Rawkergurl2003 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Wonderful Memories

Contributed by Rawkergurl2003 on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 09:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You picked me up when I was down,
I thought you were my shining knight.
I came to you with all my troubles
And you were there to comfort my darkest fears.
You never said a thing to hurt me,
Or make me insecure.
You loved me unconditionally
And to you I am forever in your debt.
You were there to kill that big black spider
Climbing on my wall.
And you always knew how to fix
whatever it was I broke.
Now I have grown older,
And you are not there as much.
I know that you still love me,
But what are you to do?
With every day that I pass
I still think of you.
And how you always knew
Why flowers never bloomed.
Or how the little people
Got inside the big black screen.
I sit here and think back
On all these wonderful memories
And as I lay those never blooming flowers down
Upon your grey cement bed
I think of all the memories we’ll have
Once we meet again.

Copyright Â© Rawkergurl2003 ... [ 2004-02-04 21:11:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wonderful Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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Wow, that's very deep. So, so emotional. Excellent write, the love you hold really shines through in every line.

Truly,
-V.S.

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