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Array ( [sid] => 33862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I SAW YOU [time] => 2004-02-04 19:14:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when i first saw you what did i see
a perfect rich princess the opposite of me
i thought me and her would never get along at all
she doesn’t have my problems or has had her back to the wall

but then something happened im not sure what
we got along which was weird enough
but then you told me these problems you had
they were almost like mine they made me feal sad

they weren’t the worse
but they were bad enough
but what totally ***** with my mind
was you were telling me and throwing you friends aside

You told me the seen at which you decided
to take your life to forget your problems and all who abide it
about running and punching inside your mind
about how you put on this act at school and buried your problems inside
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jkpunk13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I SAW YOU

Contributed by jkpunk13 on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 07:14:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

when i first saw you what did i see
a perfect rich princess the opposite of me
i thought me and her would never get along at all
she doesn’t have my problems or has had her back to the wall

but then something happened im not sure what
we got along which was weird enough
but then you told me these problems you had
they were almost like mine they made me feal sad

they weren’t the worse
but they were bad enough
but what totally ***** with my mind
was you were telling me and throwing you friends aside

You told me the seen at which you decided
to take your life to forget your problems and all who abide it
about running and punching inside your mind
about how you put on this act at school and buried your problems inside

Copyright Â© jkpunk13 ... [ 2004-02-04 19:14:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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