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Array ( [sid] => 33844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone the Sand of Time [time] => 2004-02-04 17:00:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We walk alone the sand of time,
as I close my eyes and envision,
the inevitable crime,
of my heated lover's heart.

A gentle bead of sweat rolls down my brow,
and the invigorating taste of salt fills my senses,
as my lover's heart breaks her vow,
with an exquisite suitor.

Her stare is but the Gulf of Mexico,
beautiful- just before the waning sun meets horizon.
Eyes radiating like a distant light house- iredescently aglow,
like a distant constelation of stars.

Her soft touch carresses my body,
as her hair whips about,
striking like a whip against my nude body,
and across my well-worn face.

Our bodies are silhouetted,
'gainst the canvas of the sea,
as love requited,
is expressed through thee.

We stand there dignified in the nude,
bound only by the hands of time,
We happily embrace the romantic mood,
as we silently exchange goodbyes.

Passion overwhelms thee,
as the sand of time is washed away,
by the relentless unforgiving sea,
that truley gives breath to thee. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => PassionatelyRomantic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Alone the Sand of Time

Contributed by PassionatelyRomantic on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We walk alone the sand of time,
as I close my eyes and envision,
the inevitable crime,
of my heated lover's heart.

A gentle bead of sweat rolls down my brow,
and the invigorating taste of salt fills my senses,
as my lover's heart breaks her vow,
with an exquisite suitor.

Her stare is but the Gulf of Mexico,
beautiful- just before the waning sun meets horizon.
Eyes radiating like a distant light house- iredescently aglow,
like a distant constelation of stars.

Her soft touch carresses my body,
as her hair whips about,
striking like a whip against my nude body,
and across my well-worn face.

Our bodies are silhouetted,
'gainst the canvas of the sea,
as love requited,
is expressed through thee.

We stand there dignified in the nude,
bound only by the hands of time,
We happily embrace the romantic mood,
as we silently exchange goodbyes.

Passion overwhelms thee,
as the sand of time is washed away,
by the relentless unforgiving sea,
that truley gives breath to thee.

Copyright © PassionatelyRomantic ... [ 2004-02-04 17:00:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alone the Sand of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:09:23 PM AEST
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I see that your name fits your style
thi is beauty at it's best

michelle

Re: Alone the Sand of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:49:08 PM AEST
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I am enthralled. This has a poets of yesteryear feel to it and is absolutely incredible. Very, very well done. Kie

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