Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 19:43:43 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 33824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drug addict [time] => 2004-02-04 14:58:08 [hometext] => This poem is about a friend of mine who did drugs and killed herself because of them. [bodytext] => dedicated to Jessica Marie Johnson rest in peace baby sister.

She sits in the window of her room
Looking at the drugs that she has in her hands
Wondering if she should take them.
She picks up the needle and spoon that she has.
Turning the drugs to liquid.
Placing the band around her arm
She take the needle and pushes it into her arm
Feeling the relief in her body.
Listening as her parent's bang on the door
Calling her a drug addict.
She sits there wanting to just jump out that window
and into the pool below her.
She just sits there in the room with the drugs next to her
Believing that her parents loved her once upon a time
Before she became a drug addict.
She sits in the window of her room

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lildrama04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Drug addict

Contributed by lildrama04 on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

dedicated to Jessica Marie Johnson rest in peace baby sister.

She sits in the window of her room
Looking at the drugs that she has in her hands
Wondering if she should take them.
She picks up the needle and spoon that she has.
Turning the drugs to liquid.
Placing the band around her arm
She take the needle and pushes it into her arm
Feeling the relief in her body.
Listening as her parent's bang on the door
Calling her a drug addict.
She sits there wanting to just jump out that window
and into the pool below her.
She just sits there in the room with the drugs next to her
Believing that her parents loved her once upon a time
Before she became a drug addict.
She sits in the window of her room

Copyright © lildrama04 ... [ 2004-02-04 14:58:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Drug addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 03:03:25 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

so sorry for your loss
wishing drugs didnt exist

michelle

Re: Drug addict (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:31:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This one is pretty descent. I give it a 3.4 on the Nortiscale.
norticus

Re: Drug addict (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:23:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

it's good, and i'm so sorry for your loss, but how can you be sure that's what she was thinking. i mean she might have been full of so much greater darkness, but no one will ever know.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com