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Array ( [sid] => 33789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming..... [time] => 2004-02-04 08:15:34 [hometext] => This one will go in The Red Book....... [bodytext] => Closing my eyes, off to sleep i go.
Waiting fo my favourite dream toshow.
It happens like this, but in a place i dont know,,,
Feeling you hand, locking into mine,
as i walk with you through the fields of vine.
Over the hill, to the bridge of time,
basking in the suns setting shine.
Slowly we stroll accross the boardwalk,
hearing every word as we talk.
How could this be, us, like cheese and chalk.
Reaching the middle, we stand together,
like that commitment, we have lasted almost forever.
I promised to turn my back on you "Never"
We both turn and see where we have been.
How many roads, seperately we could have seen?
As i look down, lost in your eyes, on my shoulder you lean.
Taking my arm, wrapping it around you,
"my little white dove, its you that i love." And you know it to be true.
"My sweet, take my hand i ask, lets walk on and see this life through"
Sweetly you look up, our lips meet in the softest of kiss,
Thankyou, for granting my wish.
Who could want more, accept more of our life like this.
We look behind, what did we see?
Each of our lttle clans, yours, mine and ours.
And the life we made, together you and me.We step forward into tommorow, into our later years.
Leaving behind all the frustration and tears.
Thankyou for freeing me from my fears.
There it ends with my opened eyes,
To find a way, yes i will try...

Missing you Pretty Lady..... Oh and :) :) :)
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Dreaming.....

Contributed by 13hopes on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 08:15:34 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Closing my eyes, off to sleep i go.
Waiting fo my favourite dream toshow.
It happens like this, but in a place i dont know,,,
Feeling you hand, locking into mine,
as i walk with you through the fields of vine.
Over the hill, to the bridge of time,
basking in the suns setting shine.
Slowly we stroll accross the boardwalk,
hearing every word as we talk.
How could this be, us, like cheese and chalk.
Reaching the middle, we stand together,
like that commitment, we have lasted almost forever.
I promised to turn my back on you "Never"
We both turn and see where we have been.
How many roads, seperately we could have seen?
As i look down, lost in your eyes, on my shoulder you lean.
Taking my arm, wrapping it around you,
"my little white dove, its you that i love." And you know it to be true.
"My sweet, take my hand i ask, lets walk on and see this life through"
Sweetly you look up, our lips meet in the softest of kiss,
Thankyou, for granting my wish.
Who could want more, accept more of our life like this.
We look behind, what did we see?
Each of our lttle clans, yours, mine and ours.
And the life we made, together you and me.We step forward into tommorow, into our later years.
Leaving behind all the frustration and tears.
Thankyou for freeing me from my fears.
There it ends with my opened eyes,
To find a way, yes i will try...

Missing you Pretty Lady..... Oh and :) :) :)




Copyright © 13hopes ... [ 2004-02-04 08:15:34]
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Re: Dreaming..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 08:52:27 AM AEST
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Wow this is awesomly beautifull and it reminds me of me-n-my Tarzan back when but we lost touch four years ago.
I swear it sounds like a scene from our lives at Daytona Beach Florida in 1988.
I'm in awe!
abosolutely amazing.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Dreaming..... (User Rating: 1 )
by winged on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 09:33:27 AM AEST
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very beautiful thank you




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