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Array ( [sid] => 33755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When I’m With You [time] => 2004-02-04 00:49:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel your emotions
making love with mine
in a wave of calm
that holds within it
the multiple orgasms
of deeply connected souls...
in a volcano of feeling
that erupts within me
and merges with the magma
from your eruptions

I feel our thoughts
throwing their arms
around each other
in compassionate embraces
that lock out our pain

I feel my vibes
in a padlocked connection
with yours
whose key we threw away
and will never need to find

I feel I’ve come home
my soul has found
it’s resting place
and despite
everything around us
despite the questions
and problems-

I feel- in a way
we yet do not know
everything has been made alright.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Tichawangana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

When I’m With You

Contributed by Tichawangana on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:49:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I feel your emotions
making love with mine
in a wave of calm
that holds within it
the multiple orgasms
of deeply connected souls...
in a volcano of feeling
that erupts within me
and merges with the magma
from your eruptions

I feel our thoughts
throwing their arms
around each other
in compassionate embraces
that lock out our pain

I feel my vibes
in a padlocked connection
with yours
whose key we threw away
and will never need to find

I feel I’ve come home
my soul has found
it’s resting place
and despite
everything around us
despite the questions
and problems-

I feel- in a way
we yet do not know
everything has been made alright.

Copyright Â© Tichawangana ... [ 2004-02-04 00:49:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When I’m With You (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:14:11 AM AEST
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Well Tichawangana,that was a beautiful love poem,I liked the last verse.But my favorite thing about your poem was the first stanza...Everything about it fit perfectly and I enjoyed reading.Keep posting,
PumpkinPie

Re: When I’m With You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:21:03 AM AEST
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Very intense vivd write!
luv, huggs,
emy

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