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Array ( [sid] => 33732 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-02-03 23:02:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => ALONE
Standing in the midst of total decay and desolation;
I search with all my senses for the smallest fraction of life;
As I breathe in the radioactive waste in the air;
The taste of death overwhelms me;
As I wonder through the emptiness around me,
I touch what appears to be a living thing;
Only to have it crumble beneath my touch;
In the twilight of my sanity,
I hear myself cry out;
Most all hope is gone, when the only answer I hear,
Is in my head;
My eyes scan the total abyss that lies before me;
Searching for another living human;
Not the dead, incinerated, lifeless, copses, lying in the ground;
I scream out,
"God, why?
Why am I still alive?"
I wonder why I should have to die a slow painful death;
Why me? Why did I survive?
Tears stream down my face;
Tears of sorrow and despair;
I ask myself why I am left alone?
With no sanity left in my body;
I am left alone, waiting for a resolution;
Waiting for someone to find me;
Or waiting to die;
Waiting to die a slow, painful, agonizing,
DEATH!

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Alone

Contributed by lizzielou on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

ALONE
Standing in the midst of total decay and desolation;
I search with all my senses for the smallest fraction of life;
As I breathe in the radioactive waste in the air;
The taste of death overwhelms me;
As I wonder through the emptiness around me,
I touch what appears to be a living thing;
Only to have it crumble beneath my touch;
In the twilight of my sanity,
I hear myself cry out;
Most all hope is gone, when the only answer I hear,
Is in my head;
My eyes scan the total abyss that lies before me;
Searching for another living human;
Not the dead, incinerated, lifeless, copses, lying in the ground;
I scream out,
"God, why?
Why am I still alive?"
I wonder why I should have to die a slow painful death;
Why me? Why did I survive?
Tears stream down my face;
Tears of sorrow and despair;
I ask myself why I am left alone?
With no sanity left in my body;
I am left alone, waiting for a resolution;
Waiting for someone to find me;
Or waiting to die;
Waiting to die a slow, painful, agonizing,
DEATH!

Copyright © lizzielou ... [ 2004-02-03 23:02:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alone (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 06:24:10 PM AEST
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This is one of the most powerful poems as an author i have ever read keep on writing!

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